Today I am attempting a Renga poem for Frank Tassone’s Haikai challenge. He asked us to write a Haikai poem of our choice that included crow’s first call. A Renga is usually more humorous in nature and often composed by two or more people each adding a verse. I hope I have done it justice!
Bad dreams awake me
Incessant cawing won’t stop
Outside my window
Black crow’s obnoxious racket
Creeps loudly through my pain(pane)
I lift the window
Yelling loudly at the crow
Crow ignores my fuss
I shout and bang on the pane
Breaking glass falls at my feet
My toe is bleeding
Frustration drowns out the pain
I reach for my gun
With shells in my hand I load
A bullet in the barrel
A loud gunshot fired
Black crow quickly flies away
My shot went awry
Hitting nothing but blue sky
Black crow flew back as I cried
On blood marked carpet
I tiptoed to the bathroom
Getting a band-aid
I wrapped up my toe tightly
Black crow perched laughing loudly
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Print of crow: Bing/pintrest
Lots of fun in this.
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Thank you!!
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Sounds like a frustrating experience.
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A rude awakening!
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You were lucky not to shoot a neighbour 🙂
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Ha Ha… no one close by!
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Thank goodness 🙂
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It’s always fun to know these moments in life.
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Some things are much more irritating than others. Crows are one of them.
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #3: Dwight’s latest solo #renga for my current #haikai challenge!
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Thanks Frank!
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My pleasure, Dwight!
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Smiling here!
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Thanks Linda!
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Fun reading. I do hope your verse wasn’t based in fact. Broken window, bleeding toe… ouch!
For a time I had a bunch of crows hogging my bird feeders. I had a tin can of marbles, a whistle, I would even go to my back door and open it to shoo them away. I would yell “Take turns” “You can come if you share!”… I actually don’t know when they stopped coming around. Perhaps it was when I was away for a bit and the feeders didn’t get refilled? So the crows found another source? At least the little birds only fight the squirrels now 😉
I was late to linking to Frank’s crow prompt. I must have had it in mind when I wrote a crow/raven piece which I have since linked up.
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Crows like starlings can be a big nuisance! I guess they are first cousins! LOL
My poem did have a bit of creative license and embellishment! It added the bit of humor I was looking for to make it progress well! Thanks for stopping by!
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