My box is made of flesh and blood
wrapped around a framework of bones
tied together with muscle and ligaments
once young and strong // now aging and weak.
It is a box that is ever changing
as it moves toward the culmination of life
diminishing // like a raisin in the sun
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My box contains a soul // a spirit // a breath of life
Totally separate from the shell of flesh on bones…
A medium beyond the physical //yet tied together
in a codependency of light and darkness
where Light and darkness seem to live side by side
often exchanging places as events in our lives take place
in an ongoing struggle for dominance.
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My box has served me well through the years
A medium of love and caring for others in my life
Bruised and battered at times // yet resilient and strong
feeling the power of Light // finding my way through the dark.
As my soul struggles to be set free, my aging shell hangs on
My mind knows this box will decay in time
while my spirit will return to its creator // unencumbered
Kim at d’Verse introduced us to Welsh poet, Gillian Clark, and her poem, My Box here. She asked us to write a similar poem about our own personal box, either real or metaphorical. I decided to write about my physical self as my box.
Responding to Karla Hales last post about the eclipse, I came up with the thought about light and darkness residing together in our being, so I included that in my poem.
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You are a good soul, Dwight.❤️
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Thank you so much Melissa. I appreciate your kind words.
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‘as it moves toward the culmination of life/diminishing // like a raisin in the sun’
That’s beautiful Dwight! Great poem.
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Thank you so much, Peter. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Love this especially; “My box contains a soul // a spirt // a breath of life/ Totally separate from the shell of flesh on bones.” 🩷🩷
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Thank you Sanaa. I appreciate your comment.
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The art looks almost tribal, love it
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Ha ha… I love that perspective! Thank you so much.
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Love this
metaphor! Good job 👍🏽
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Thank you Jan. Our boxes are getting more fragile it seems.
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Well said, Dwight! My box is not the same but the spirit remains strong.
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Time catches up with us all, while the soul longs for eternity! Thank you so much for your comments.
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Dwight, this is beautiful. What a powerful and profound poem about your “box”. Before I ever read my name, I smiled at the reference to the light and dark residing together. Thank you, Dwight. I used to think my box would be much stronger at the age I’m at; one never knows! Yet, I feel stronger and I’m using all the power and prayers to keep my “box” strong. I love the image of the soul wanting to be free while the box hangs on and decays. You’re such a gifted writer and artist, my friend! Thank you for blessing us!
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Thank you so much my friend for your comments and inspiration. You box is getting stronger. Hang in there. It is not time yet to let go.
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You’re welcome, dear Dwight! Amen! God is not finished with my box, yet!
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Your book is quite amazing … an open book if may say so. I enjoyed every line. Stay healthy, strong, happy.
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Thank you so much my friend. I am trying to do the best I can while I can.
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Spirit and flesh in codepedence… love it… and somewhere there’s an end to a new beginning.
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I am glad you enjoyed this one, Bjorn. To be human you can’t have one without the other.
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Love this, Dwight. “where Light and darkness seem to live side by side”…so true for most of us.
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Thank you Punam. I would say for all of us. I appreciate your comments.
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This is wonderful Dwight – profound too.
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words.
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A very insightful and ultimately comforting poem!
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Thank you very much for your comments. I am glad that came through in my poem.
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You’re welcome, Dwight.
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very powerful, Dwight
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Thank you very much, Beth. I am glad you liked it.
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A very special box that has traveled many paths in life. A reflective poem.
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A beautifully written and self-reflective piece, Dwight!
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Thank you Eugi. Glad you enjoyed it.
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My pleasure, Dwight!
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I loved this take on the prompt, Dwight, profound and deeply moving.
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Thank you Dora. I am glad it connected with you. I appreciate your kind affirmation.
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Your poetry and perspectives are a blessing. Thank you, Dwight.
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How kind of you to say so. Thank you so much for following my posts and sharing your thoughts.
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Welcome so much. 🙏🏻
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Your box is filled with blood, sweat and tears, lots of laughs, wisdom, color that has served you so well and continues to Dwight. I am grateful to be part of a small corner of your well and those you touch. Delightful poetry💓
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Thank you so much Cindy. I am glad you are a part of my life as well. It has been such an interesting and wonderful connection. Amazing who we learn to know on the blog.
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You’re so welcome, always Dwight. Awww thank you so very much. It really has and been and such a gift of the heart. We are lucky
💓🙏🏼💕
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Yes, I agree!
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Beautifully done, Dwight! 💞💞💞 I love the “bruised and battered at times // yet resilient and strong”….I feel this one deeply.
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Thank you, Dawn. Seems we all go through those times in our lives. The goal is to make it through even stronger than before. I am glad this one connected with you.
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A realistic yet sacred perspective. I see these things in you.
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Thank you Lisa. It was good to reflect on this.
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You’re welcome.
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I like these very much and as a senior myself I can relate; I’ve subscribed looking forward to what you next come up with
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Thank you very much. I am glad this connected with you. Thanks for following my blog. I will check yours out as well!
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Dwight, I just love how, despite physical decay, your finds strength and resilience through love and caring for others. This is so YOU!
~David
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Thank you my friend, for your kind affirmation. i appreciate your comments and connection. Hope all is well with you and your family.
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I love this! You covered all the greatness our boxes hold with appreciation 😊
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I am glad this one connected with you, Astrid.
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