In my father-in-law’s things, after he died, we found some sketches he had done some years earlier. This Amish buggy was perfectly drawn down to the minute details. Our d’verse prompt from Bjorn, is to use onomatopoeia to create a poem. These are words that sound like they are spoken. I decided to use Dad’s Amish buggy to make my poem. The onomatopoeia words are in italics.
Clip Clop Ride
Amish buggy // wheels rattling against pavement
Rolling down the road // slowing down traffic
Thwack of the reins on the horses back
Trotting down the road to town and back
Rolling past fields with mooing cows
And a farmer feeding his pregnant sows
Little girls sitting in back with their brothers
Avoiding tourists with cameras and snapping shutters
Home again past their barn full of hay
And the cackle of chickens as they scratch and play
A unique life style frozen in time
Quite a different choice from yours and mine
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Sketch: Paul White – Reposted from 2018
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I made a copy of the sketch and attempted to do a watercolor of the picture….
Nice one. The drawing is wonderful.
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Thank you very much! it is a treasure to keep.
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I like the poem and the inspiration drawing very much!
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Thank you! We found three or four of these in his things. We were impressed with his detail,
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You’re welcome!
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wow – that’s really impressive sketching!
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Thank you David… yes, he did a very fine job!
Dwight
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A truly wonderful sketch, and equally descriptive poem Dwight ..
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Thank You so much Ivor! He did a great sketch.
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What fun to see how you let your father-in-law’s creativity inspire your own! Quite enchanting!!
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Thank you Jan! I tend to get inspired very easily! He did do a wonderful sketch!
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Lovely drawing and poetry💗
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Thank you very much!
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WOW, Ruth’s father was quite the artist. So that’s where she gets her creative talents from? 🎨 Love your poem my friend! So complementary of the sketch. ✍🏼 Awesome Dwight! 💖
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Thank you for your Kind words Kym. Yes I am sure she did. He was an oldest child perfectionist. :>)
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WHOA, those are some big shoes my friend. Thanks for sharing something so personal and beautiful with us Dwight! 🎨✏🖼 It’s always my pleasure! 💖🥰💝
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You are welcome Kym. It was too good not to!
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A lovely poem to go with the beautiful sketch🤩🙂… Especially love the last two lines of the poem ❤️
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Thank you very much!
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Nice work, both drawing and poem.
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Thank you very much!
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This is so wholesome! We might as well envy their lifestyle 😉 Lovely drawing and such a beautiful, fancy story in a little poem.
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Thank you Sam. It is something I am familiar with and so it was easy to write about!
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Dwight,
The picture and poem make me want to have a clip clop ride! Do the Amish keep to themselves or do they foster friendships with those like yourself when you lived nearby?
pax,
dora
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They do interact with the public and with neighbors. Some work on construction jobs etc. but most relationships are at arms length.
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I wondered, and given their creed, I can understand. Just googled and found they seem to have gotten off lightly relatively speaking during the pandemic, thank God, from what I read here (article written last month):
https://www.realclearpolitics.com/video/2021/10/10/attkisson_how_amish_communities_became_the_first_to_acheive_herd_immunity_from_covid-19_in_may_2020.html
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From what I was told, they developed herd immunity early on, due to not isolating like the rest of us.
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Good for them! We followed the experts unfortunately, not the science.
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We keep thinking we can save ourselves! Doesn’t seem to work that way!
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Fascinating depictions in drawing and poetry
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Thank you Derrick! It is one of my favorites.
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Thank you very much!
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Thank you as well for the interesting thoughts. Enjoy a nice upcoming week. xx Michael
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I appreciate it. And you too!
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I am really surprised. I had heard about this possibility, but never before read something like this. The sketch is fantastic to get an impression. xx Michael
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Yes it is most interesting! Thank you, Michael!
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incredible detail and such a gift!
Talent.. father like son Dwight!❣️
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Thank you Cindy. He did a superb drawing. Father like Daughter! This is Ruth’s father! :>)
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You’re welcome!
Oh gotcha!! Yes indee!💕
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:>)
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I loved your poem Dwight. I love reading amish novels. Its a cool lifestyle, fascinating. I only learned about it through books. Xx
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Thank you Carol Anne. They are an interesting group. My ancestors grew up in an Amish/Mennonite community in Pennsylvania.
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Great sketch!And the poem’s beautiful too,onomatopoeia sounds like a nice poetic device to use… 😉
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Thank you very much. Yes it really is fun to use.
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Enjoyable from start to finish! Pairing a poem with your father-in-law’s sketch is endearing and nice job with onomatopoeia. I have some old cherished photographs of ancestors riding buggies (not Amish). I don’t know that I will every write a poem for them, but anything is possible. 😃
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I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. He did a wonderful sketch here. We found three other sketches he did that were equally as good.
Thank you for your comment. You know we write about anything and everything. yes anything is possible!
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🎨 ✍🏻 📸 💗
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What a treasure to have your FIL’s artwork! That drawing is lovely and makes a person feel calm just looking at it! 🙂 Perfect title, too!
A quieter calmer gentler, yet good “old fashioned” hard-working lifestyle is good for the body, mind, heart, and soul.
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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Yes it is very different from the rat race we live in.
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Thanks!
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