Barbara loved the early morning, just before the sunrise. It always took her back in time to her High School years when she had to catch the bus at seven in the morning for the long twenty-mile ride to school.
She always liked sitting by the window so she could look out and watch the changes as Nature painted its canvas with hues of red, orange, yellow, and then blue. But she especially liked the mornings when the moon hung low on the horizon. On those days she loved imagining the moon as more than a big chunk of rock reflecting sunlight. In her mind she thought, “An early moon is just a piece of change in the softening sky.”
Now she sits on her porch with her morning coffee watching the sun and moon playing games with each other above the mountains.
Photo and Painting: Dwight L. Roth
Today at d’Verse, Merril gave us a prosery prompt. We are to write prose (flash fiction of 144 words) instead of poetry, but we must include a given line from a poem that she has chosen. The line is: “An early moon is just a piece of change in the softening sky.” from — James Masao Mitsui, “Spring Poem for the Sake of Breathing, Written After a Walk to Foster Island”
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beautiful.
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Thank you very much!
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Lovely writing – you have captured the softening of the sky as it changes.
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Thank you. I decided to go with morning rather than evening as you did.
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Your flash fiction and accompanying painting work really well together.
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Thank you so much, Liz. It is one of my favorite paintings.
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You’re welcome, Dwight. I can see why it’s one of your favorite paintings!
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I sold it to a former student of mine who lives in Virginia. It is 3′ x 3′
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Sounds like a good home for it!
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She loves it!
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Lovely write with perfect images to accompany it 💙
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Thank you so much. These two moons seem to crawl right in to my story! :>)
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What a lovely pairing – thank you, Dwight. 🙂🌺🙏
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Thank you very much. I am so glad you enjoyed it. I love painting big moons.
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Fantastic story and luv your painting.
Much💚love
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Thank you so much, Gillena! I love big moons as you know.
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So beautiful❤️
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Thank you so much!
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Very nicely incorporated Dwight
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Thank you very much Sadje!
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My pleasure
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Nicely nostalgic
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Thank you Derrick, I love nostalgic.
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Photo, painting and Prosery fit together well, Dwight. I especially enjoyed the imagery and colours of the second paragraph and, of course, the final image of the ‘sun and moon playing games with each other above the mountains’.
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I am very glad you enjoyed this story, Kim. I appreciate your sharing what parts you enjoyed most.
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so beautiful
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Beautiful, Dwight! That is my favorite time of day, too. 🙂
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Thank you Merril. Early morning is a beautiful time of the day.
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You’re welcome, Dwight. It is!
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A lovely trio of beauty, Dwight!
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Thank you very much, Eugi!
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My pleasure, Dwight!
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“An early moon is just a piece of change in the softening sky.” ~Dwight, you never cease to amaze me with your giftedness, in both painting and writing. It’s absolutely stunning. I saw the moon last night. Thank you for capturing its beauty!
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Thank you Karla. It was a fun one to write. I saw the big moon when I went to bed the other night! I am so glad you enjoyed it and thank you for you kind words!
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You’re welcome, Dwight! It’s my blessing!
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The prompt slipped so effortlessly into this piece. Well done!
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Thank you Susan. It seems to work well with my moons!
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Beautifully written, Dwight ❤
~David
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Thank you, David. I appreciate your comment.
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I love the morning moon, too … what a beautiful reminiscence, Dwight! Your painting is intriguing ❤️👍🏽
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Thank you Jan. The moon setting or rising is always enchanting.
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Excellent story and I love your painting, Dwight! Beautiful memories to cherish.
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Thank you Colleen, for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed my painting and story.
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I’m amazed at how poets also paint! Bravo to you, Dwight. 👏🏻
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Thank you!! :>)
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Beautifully composed Dwight 💕
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Thank you very much!
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The early morning is my favorite time of the day. Lovely scene Dwight.
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Thank you Grace!
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I love the image of sun and moon playing games.
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Early morning can be like that… when the moon plays hide and seek!
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your painting and poem are the best part of mornings Dwight! ❣️
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Thank you so much for your kind comment, Cindy.
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You’re so welcome Dwight!💞
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“sun and moon playing games”…what a fun way to look at it! Sunrise is my favorite time of the day 💞💞💞
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Thank you so much. With a name like Dawn, how could you not enjoy sunrise! :>)
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
AND A MEMORY THAT WILL LAST FOREVER!
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Thank you Jonathan!
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YUPPERS!
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