Sitting in the driveway, under the old Maples, a long-forgotten song played on the car radio. It took him right back to that moment in time when he was sixteen. “Peggy Sue, Peggy Sue, with a love so rare and true…” floated from the speakers. Peggy Sue was one of those memories he had pushed back into the closet of his mind.
Under the maples, in the dark of the evening, he hesitantly gave her a kiss. It was the first for both of them. It all happened so quickly; and then she was off, back around the house.
Hormones raged, as they sat holding hands on the swing, under the naked bulb of the front porch light. Pandora’s box had been opened, never to be closed again.
Though time and circumstances changed their course. “These memories were left here with the trees.”
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Painting: Dwight L. Roth
Tonight at d’Verse we are writing Flash Fiction, which must include a line of a poem in our story. Stories are limited to only 144 words.
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Excellent! Good job!
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Thank you Valerie!
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I love the sensory experience this evokes. I hear the song, see the scene, smell the air, and imagine what it feels like to be these characters. Very well done!
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Thank you so much! I am glad it took you there!
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Such cherished memories, and the trees can keep a secret.
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Fun to dream about! Thanks Jade!
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You are welcome.
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“These memories were left here with the trees.”…. beautifully poetic…
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Thanks Ivor. I thought it was a great sentiment as well!
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ah first love what a romantic ….
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Ha Ha! Just can’t help myself!! Thanks!
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so sweet Dwight!
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Ah a chick flick.. I love a happy ending.
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First time love is usually a feelgood thing!
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Thanks Judy!
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I do love those first love stories… the innocence… I actually think Pandora was benign…
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Thanks Bjorn! Innocence is always in fashion!
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Great story! I loved the feel of tentative love!
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Excellent writing Dwight ! Good use of the prompt line. Enjoyed reading this. Buddy Holly adds to any situation. Even brings his own Crickets. 🙂 Great picture. Did you draw it?
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Thank you Rob., I appreciate your kind words. Yes great music from days gone by! I painted this homeplace for a friend of mine It was 4ftx4Ft!
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Budding young love! Beautiful Dwight.
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Thank you Linda!
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The smallest thing can revive the past. What might have been? It’s always an open question. (K)
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We never know what might have been!
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Delightful, Dwight. First love–so sweet–perhaps bittersweet. I like the way you used the prompt. Thank you for joining in!
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Thank you Merril. I appreciate your comments. You always seem to remember that first one, even if it is flash fiction!!
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🙂
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I love this and how even the trees sing.
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Thank you Mary! Nothing quite like the first time!
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