Ending Lines…
You can push the pause button, but you can never erase
Several lifetimes of memories
Carried home… set on the shelf
Waiting for harvest
***
Now, I am the last to let leaves weep and stand naked as cold winter shivers around me.
Waiting for snowfall
my work’s almost done, then I’ll take my leave
No money required
My escape from the eternal darkness around me
as others foolishly think our towers of babel will be our answer
leaving tourists in awe… but no babies sing on the boulevard De L’Orangerie
and sailors drink a toast to a red-sky night
***
Today at d’Verse, Laura asked us to consider ending lines! We are to take the ending lines from our last twelve poems and compose them into a poem. They are to be as written with only minor changes. She said, “You may add preposition, conjunction or change of tense, if it helps the flow.” I did a couple minor gender changes from she to I and my to make it work. The rest of the lines were as written.
Photo of my work in progress: Dwight L. Roth
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Great job, Dwight! I really like how you formatted the lines, clever and fun to read.
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Thank you Helen! I had a fun time putting it together.
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This was cleverly constructed.
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Thankyou so much! It was an interesting pompt.
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This is fantastic, Dwight! Love it! Also love the touchy-feely paper presentation 🙂 I love touchy-feely poems ❤
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I am a hands-on person, so it worked out very well for me to cut it up.
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Thank you very much, Sunra!
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You’re most welcome! 🙂
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Wow! You created something very special here, Dwight!
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Thank you, Michele! It was a fun challenge!
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You are welcome! You repurposed your poems like you do your volunteer work. 😊
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Ha ha… you are right! It all comes together in the end!
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👍🏻
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A fun experiment!
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Yes, I loved it., Thanks Liz!
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You’re welcome, Dwight!
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So surreal but not fatalistic. And I love the tone of work accomplished for a larger purpose. 🙂
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Thank you, Dora. My thoughts seem to run in those veins. I appreciate all of your kind words.
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This works well. Nicely done, Dwight.
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Dwight I grok the story of your lines. It feels like a message from on high. Really like your presentation, but in hard copy and the font change versions.
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Thank you, Lisa. It came together amazingly well. I enjoyed the challenge.
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You’re very welcome, my friend.
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This was cool! Your title is perfect, and I enjoyed reading the little pause after “waiting for harvest” 👏👏
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Thank you so much Tricia, for your kind words. It seemed like the thought changed at that point!
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💓
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Intriguing! In the end, everything works out 🙂
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Thank you, Margaret. Hopefully it will.
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This looked like a fun challenge to participate in, Dwight…and very well done!
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Thank you. It was a fun challenge. You are welcome join in on the fun at d’Verse!
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Great job Dwight.
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Thank you Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Brilliant Dwight! You personified what a found poem looks like from last lines
“but no babies sing on the boulevard De L’Orangerie
and sailors drink a toast to a red-sky night”
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Thank you so much, Laura, for your kind affirmation. I really enjoyed this prompt. I am a visual learner so the cuttings worked very well for me.
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Did you really craft this one using the paper clippings per the photo?
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Yes, I did. If you blow up the photo you can read the poem as it is below. :>) It was a great way to organize the lines.
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Your hands-on muse was working overtime on this one! 👍🏽❤️
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Yes, it never stops! Thanks Jan!
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This is as I imagine ‘found’ poetry ought to be. And the fact that the tone is so full of endings makes it just right.
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Thank you, Jane! I appreciate your kind words. They all seem to come together as I laid them out.
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That’s how it’s supposed to happen 🙂
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Perfect found poem, Dwight! It seems you really enjoyed creating this one.
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Yes, this was one that I could get into. The cut and paste was what made it work for me. Thank you so much!
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Bravo my dear friend. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 Recycling at it’s best!!! 😍🦋😘
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Thank you, Kym… Some things are good the second time around!
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Don’t you know it? I second that my dear friend. 😘👏🏼😍
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:>)
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Wow great capture with your title and your lines are so representational of who you are in so many ways.. Nicely done and great picture Dwight. You rocked this one! ❤️
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Thank you for your kind affirmation, Cindy. It was a lot of fun to see what would evolve out of all those end lines!
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It’s always my pleasure. That is so much fun to be surprised by our work! ❤️
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Yes, it was very satisfying to see it all come together!
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I bet! ❣️
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Can you share the link for this poem, I especially like these lines
“My escape from the eternal darkness around me”
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I mean the link to the poem with these last lines “My escape from the eternal darkness around me”
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Oh, here it is: https://rothpoetry.wordpress.com/2022/11/25/light-in-the-darkness-2/
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Thank you!
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I enjoyed your cut and paste poem, Dwight…fun to read!
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Thank you, Lynn. It came together very well.
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First of all, I love the title! It fits perfect. And your chosen lines work beautifully. Bravo, Dwight!
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Thank you so much, Jay! I appreciate your kind words.
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That’s so fun to read! You put it together so well!
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Thank you so much!
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I love the title and how you worked it all together. Have a good weekend!
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Thank you very much, Grace!
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This is fantastic!
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Thank you very much for your comment!
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My pleasure! 😃 so lovely to meet you!
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You are welcome!
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I think your lines were magnetized to each other, Dwight. This poem was meant to be!
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Thank you so much for your kind comments. They did come together in a way that was quite unexpected for me.
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Love it, and a special touch – how you went ‘old-school’ and actually cut up the lines! 🙂
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Thank you so much! I am old… so old-school works well for me! :>)
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What a lovely presentation, Dwight 😀 It gives a nostalgic and deeply personal feel to the poem. 💘💘
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Thank you Sanaa. I had a good time with this one! I am glad you enjoyed it.
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I like how you constructed this with the actual slips of paper. Nicely done, Dwight!
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My brain seems to work better with pieces!! :>) Thanks.
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You’re very welcome. 🙂
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Such an interesting prompt, right? I am especially smitten with these lines in your poem:
“Several lifetimes of memories
Carried home… set on the shelf
Waiting for harvest”
This reminds me of the photos on our shelf in the living room: my parents, granparents and great-grandparents. Obviously all gone for many years…but sitting there on my shelf…waiting for the moments’ when I reflect on the past…think of them.
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It really seems to work that way doesn’t it?
Even in our own lives every decade or two seems to be a different lifetime for us.
I really did enjoy the prompt.
Thank you for your comment.
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Works so well Dwight. I especially love the idea of memories waiting for harvest, wonderful thought.
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Thank you very much, Paul!
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Welcome Dwight 🙂
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You did so very well here… especially, the first stanza is seamless.
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Thank you, Bjorn. I was amazed at how well the lines fit together!
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amazing 😍
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Thank you very much!
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