A strange wild song full of chocolaty words
keeps running through my head
Not creamy and smooth, but totally absurd
Leaving marshmallow sweetness, yet filled with dread
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Three voices combine in syrupy harmonies past
Music of gumdrop size notes and candy corn tears
Floating like an epilogue to through the looking glass
Running slug streaks on the window of my ears
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The voice of the lobster belts out his song
A sea dirge for the aged aged man
Covering a multitude of sins as sweetness drones on
All caramel and chocolate just for him
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But it’s too late now, The White Knight’s Song
It’s just four sticky riddles, all in the golden afternoon
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Photo: Dwight L. Roth
At d’Verse, Sanaa gave us two options for our prompt. We could pick three titles from a list of Lewis Carrolls poems and use them for inspiration, or we could write a poem about candy but using it in an untraditional sense. I took the liberty to carry the prompt to extreme and used Carroll’s poem titles and candied words to write a nonsense poem in semi-sonnet from. The poem titles are dark highlighted, and I used more than three!
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*amused applause*
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Thanks David!
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Well done! Very nonsensical.
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Thank you Liz! The joy of writing for a prompt!
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You’re welcome, Dwight!
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Wonderful fantasy.
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A little silliness is good for the soul! This one is truly nonsensical, Dwight ❤
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Ha ha… it really is! Perhaps I have been puffing on Lewis Carols caterpillar’s happy pipe!
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Marvelous! Your creativity was overflowing its boundaries!! ( Are there boundaries for creativity?)
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I hope not! :>) Thank you Jan! This was truly train of consciousness with no plan in site!
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Your poem would do well in Alice In Wonderland, Dwight!
Thank you!
Joanna
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Ha ha… It does have that spirit about it!
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I love this ~~ the “jabberwockiness” of it!
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Thank you Helen. It truly is Jabberwocky!
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Fun! You used many of his titles AND candy! 😍
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:>) Thanks… it was fun to write!
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Thank you for sharing your post 😇 I can’t find my chocolate. I need chocolates Sir 😂
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This was great!
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Thank you so much!
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Fun and surreal, this line especially: “Running slug streaks on the window of my ears”
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Ha ha… sounds a bit sticky! Thanks Lisa!
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You’re welcome, my friend.
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This is absolutely delightful! I can see you had a lot of fun with this prompt 😊 which makes me happy. Especially love; “Three voices combine in syrupy harmonies past/Music of gumdrop size notes and candy corn tears.” Thank you so much for writing! ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you Sanaa! I got a little crazy with this one. It was fun once I got into it! Glad you enjoyed my craziness!
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You’re welcome! It is wonderfully creative 😀
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:>)
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I love this nonsense poem, quite a delightful one.
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Thank you so much Daphny
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You’re most welcome, Dwight!
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Bravo, Dwight! “Just 4 sticky riddles…” I love the creativity and imagery. How fun!
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Thank you so much! It was fun a surreal to write! So glad you enjoyed it!
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You’re welcome!
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we need a little nonsense and fun right now Dwight since nothing makes sense so bravo. Complete with all the sweetness! 💖👏👏
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Ha ha… yes, we need to get our minds off the craziness in the world. Thank you so much Cindy. I am glad you enjoyed it!
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Absolutely… but I went straight to crazy in mine today. Couldn’t help myself. 🤷♀️🙏🌈🥰
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:>)
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Very creative!
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Thank you so much!
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Dwight, I thoroughly enjoyed your nonsensical take!
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Wonderful! I am glad you liked it! Thanks You!
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I am old enough to hear the lobster’s song.
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Ha ha… I hope he doesn’t sing too loudly yet!
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