I wrote this poem a couple of years ago. I love the sentiments in it and decided to repost it again in memory of my mom who passed away in 2007 at the age of 93.
A Love Story
She watched him tall and lean
With bib overalls and a head of dark hair
Thinking how handsome he was
How strong and capable a man he had become
He was only sixteen //but gave the appearance of eighteen
His gait was long // intense // full of determination
She loved that about him // the boy/man from across the field
Smart and fun to be around // his smile was full of laughter.
There he was, driving his father’s four milk cows up her lane
To share pasture with twenty-five more
Self-conscious // she picked her father’s tee shirt
Hanging it on the porch line strung between two posts
Glancing towards the lane she caught his attention
He waved and gave a hearty, “Hi Beatrice! How are you today!”
Tongue tied, she could only reply, “I’m fine!”
And then he was gone // on up the lane and over the hill
It was evident he was special // graduating from high school at sixteen
She // only fourteen // knew she was in love
She would wait for him and follow him to the ends of the earth…
And she did
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In memory of my mother who lived across the field from my father when they were growing up in the early part of the last century.
Priceless!!
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Yes, I agree… Thanks Jan.
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How lovely.
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Thank you very much!
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You’re very welcome.
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Beautiful and moving.
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Thank you so much!
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Absolutely beautiful 🤩
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Thank you very much!
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I remember you posting this wonderful poem before, Dwight, and I like it just as much as the first time.
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Wonderful. Thank you Peter for your kind words.
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What a beautiful window into your parents’ early lives! Thank you for re-posting it, Dwight.
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Thank so much, Will. And you are welcome.
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Such a lovely tribute to your Mom so young and beautiful! My grandmother was 14 when she married my grandfather and 16 when she had her first baby.. Just a baby herself. 💓
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Wow. can you imagine being a mom at 16! Thank you for your kind words and sharing this.
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I CANNOT!!!!! Wow, is right! You’re so welcome, always❣️
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They both have kindly faces and I see each of them in you. Lovely poem for your parents.
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Thank you Lisa. It is amazing how long they have been gone.
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You’re welcome. I know what you mean. My dad died in the 90’s.
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❤
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:>)
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Wonderful. You might want to correct gate in line 6
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Ha ha… thank you my friend! I tend to miss some of those at times.
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whar tender share! My Nanna and my Mum were Beatrice too.
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How interesting. Thank you for sharing! It must have been a common name back at the turn of the last century.
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Oh this is so sweet Dwight.
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Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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You’re welcome 😉
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I love this loving tribute to your mom.
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Thank you, Liz. We gathered some of these details from her early diaries.
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She was a writer, too!
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Will… She was not a writer but kept a diary all her life!
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You’re welcome, Dwight. I’ll bet you treasure those diaries.
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Yes, They got divided up among the five of us.
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Heartfelt.
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Thank you very much.
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What a different time that was, but love’s call never changes! Beautiful remembrance, Dwight!
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You are right in both cases! Love is a wonderful thing!
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A priceless and touching piece Dwight!
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Thank you so much, Eugi.
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You’re welcome, Dwight!
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Very moving, Dwight, brought a tear
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Thank you Michael. I am glad you connected with my story.
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❤️
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How beautiful! ❤️
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Thank you very much!
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A wonderful memory, Dwight. Your mother lived a long life ❤
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yes she did. She outlived my dad by twenty years.
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I remember this special share. A poem that has grown sweeter with time. Lovely photos. 💞
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How nice that you remember it. I love it also.
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My pleasure to do so. 🙏🏻
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Dwight, this is heartwarming. What a beautiful tribute to your Mom. I love seeing their photos. This is wonderful!!
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Thank you so much. I enjoy remembering their story.
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It’s my blessing, Dwight. It’s easy to see what amazing people they were–and in YOU, too!
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:>)
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Great Poem!!!
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Thank you very much.
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Awww! I love this!
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Thank you so much.
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Such a lovely read, Dwight. With few words you somehow painted quite a detailed picture of your parents in the early days of their relationship. What a handsome couple, too! I have to wonder if their story isn’t similar to my father’s parents, who grew up on neighboring farms as well.
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It is a wonderful scene to relive and remember. I always enjoyed the story of their coming together. I am sure this was often repeated back in the days when we were more agricultural as a society. Thank you for sharing your comments.
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What a beautifully written love story and memories, Dwight! 💞💞💞
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