What is the Raging for… (a response poem)

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Do not go gentle into that good night

Dylan Thomas

1914 –1953

Do not go gentle into that good night,

Old age should burn and rave at close of day;

Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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Though wise men at their end know dark is right,

Because their words had forked no lightning they

Do not go gentle into that good night.

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Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright

Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,

Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,

And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,

Do not go gentle into that good night.

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Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight

Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,

Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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And you, my father, there on the sad height,

Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray.

Do not go gentle into that good night.

Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

*Dylan Marlais Thomas, born October 27, 1914, in South Wales, was the archetypal Romantic poet of the popular American imagination.

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https://poets.org/poem/do-not-go-gentle-good-night

My response to Dylan’s Poem…

What is the Raging For

Why rage against the dying of the light

It comes to both wild and wise // at the blinding of sight

Even the good and grave see light beyond the vale

So why rage in old age after a life of stories to tell

Who is the raging for at the dimming of the end

Is it for God watching over all that’s ever been

Surely too late to worry about what’s not been done

Perhaps it makes hobgoblins dancing circling in fun

Even my father did not rage when his heart failed at the very end

It would have only made me feel worse not seeing him again

No, why rage against what unknowns may come

When at the dying of the light there may be

another exploding sun.

Today at d’Verse, guest host Dora gave us a challenging prompt to take a dead poet whose work inspired us and write a response to one of his poems. I chose Dylan Thomas’s poem, Don’t Go Gentle into That Good Night.

As I have grown older, I often think about end-of-life concepts. This poem strikes a chord with me in a challenging way. I was happy to have a chance to respond to Dylan’s poem.

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Photo: Dwight L. Roth

Manageable or Extreme

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What ever happened to the small farmstead

The hundred acres that kept a family fed

With twenty-five cows to milk and hens laying eggs

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What has become of small towns and village streets

Where one could walk with neighbors to greet

As populations grow more demands are made

Thoughts turn to extremes as new streets are laid

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No room spread out we’re all crowded together

And it looks like it’s not going to get any better

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Co-operate agriculture now feeds our world’s populations

With animals in cages and foods beyond recognition

Acres of Nature // razed // turned into developments

Land stripped bare, covered with concrete and pavement

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“Little boxes on the hillside, Little boxes made of ticky-tack

Little boxes, Little boxes and they all look just the same” *

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Is the world sustainable with our growing demands

For rights to water, boarders, and lands

What will become of us when we are all packed in

Tighter and tighter like sardines in a can?

Photo: Dwight L. Roth

Posting for d’Verse Poets Pub open link night.

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Questions of War…

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The Unanswered Questions of War

(Written just prior to the Iraq war)

What do you say to the little girl’s mom

When all she has left is the child in her arms

And the girl is there, and the girl is dead…

What do you say to the little girl’s mom?

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What do you say when no answers come

When the battle is over and the war is won

How can you say it was worth the cost

When the one you loved most is lost?

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What do you say to the mother whose son

Was killed in the war so that freedom is won

And the boy is there and the boy is dead…

What do you say to the mother at home?

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What do you say to the young wife at home

When all she has left is the flag in her palms?

And her husband is there, and her husband is dead

What do you say to the young wife at home?

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What do you say when no answers come

When the battle is over and the war is won

How can you say it was worth the cost

When the one you loved most is lost?

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What do you say to the little girl’s Mom…

Dwight L. Roth   3/03 & 4/04

Reposting this one today for Punam’s d’Verse prompt of an anti-war poem that describes the tragedy of war and its affect on everyone.

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The Midas Touch

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My son lives in the beautiful Shenandoah Valley of Virginia. Their Fall colors are starting to show ahead of us here in North Carolina. In his front yard a giant maple tree stands full of green leaves all summer long. But when fall arrives, it begins to show itself in the most spectacular way. Green leaves turn to gold that glows in the sunshine.

Giant maple tree

Transforms from green to gold

A century old

Chris's Maple 2023

Photos: Chris Roth

Posting for Monday Haibun prompt at d’Verse today.

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My Happy Place

About a year and a half ago Habitat for Humanity purchased a Bi-Lo grocery store that closed in Monroe. It was to become the new Habitat Restore. They have done renovations on it to get it ready for us to move into. Tomorrow is our opening day for the new store.

The past couple of weeks I have been at work building worktables in my new large workspace. When I asked how they wanted it done, the said it was up to me. They told me to give them a list of what I needed, and they would purchase it for me.  I gave them the list and the next day it was sitting on a cart in my big empty room!

The room is about 18 x 28 feet. I thought I’d died and gone to heaven. I built three tables, one 18 feet long for me to work on, one 8 ft. long for the electrical testing of lights and fans, and one 8 ft. for my chop saw. I moved three pallets of stuff from the old store and put it into my new space. It is wonderful.

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Habitat Restore

Fixing what’s broken to sell

It’s my happy place

I have been volunteering at the Restore since 2012. It is a great organization and a wonderful place to volunteer. The people are friendly and appreciative of what I do. Support them if you can. People helping people, that’s what it’s all about!

Choose Peace

“an eye for an eye makes the whole world blind”

~ wise proverb

Seems the world will never learn there is no freedom in revenge

Justice may be served but satisfaction is seldom gained

An eye for an eye propagates embedded hate that never ends

Hate has made the whole world blind leaving us all in the dark

But how does one turn the other cheek when faced with atrocities

How does the world solve its differences without death and destruction

Can nations forgive one another and live in peace and harmony

We can’t control what others do, but we can control our response

As the song says, “Let there be Peace on Earth, and Let it begin with me”

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Posting this on d’Verse Poets Pub this evening for Bjorn’s post on writing a poem in the collective voice. I wrote this one yesterday and realized it is written in the collective voice of the World, so I am posting it this evening.

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Obscure Intersections

Van Goah -Skeleton smoking a cigarette

When age has left us become a bag of bones

we fade into obscurity as our dreams go up in smoke.

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But, we can only stop and reflect on the lives we have lived

thankful that dreams and reality are continually intertwined

as we move through life creating memories to share.

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The never-ending helix of our lives

came to us

and through us

and continues on into the future,

carrying our identity, our dreams, and our DNA

to blend with the eternal at each intersection.

Painting: Vincent van Gogh, Head of a Skeleton with a Burning Cigarette (1886), © Van Gogh Museum, Amsterdam

Today at d’Verse, Melissa shared paintings from three artists who struggled with mental illness. She asked us to choose one of them to write a poem about today.

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Afterglow

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With love unfolding the celebration ends

Wedding guests gone, the clean-up begins

Folding chairs packed up in a truck

The tent comes down in the soggy wet muck

While in love’s afterglow the bride and groom share…

and smile as they fold their memories with care

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Photos: Dwight L. Roth

Today at d’Verse, De Jackson asked us to write a Quadrille using a form of the word fold. Since we celebrated my granddaughter’s wedding this past rainy weekend, I chose that as my subject.

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Rain or Shine

This weekend we flew to Chicago to attend our granddaughter’s wedding. Everyone knew rain was in the forecast for Saturday. Plans being made, the show/wedding must go on, and it did. It was a grand time, but the rain did not dampen our spirits, nor did the cold wind deter what was about to happen. It was a beautiful wedding in spite of the weather.

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Rain or shine

The wedding will happen

Grandparents will be there

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Fall closes in

Green leaves tinge with gold

Bride puts on her gown

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Tent goes up

Walls flap in the rain

Gowns tinge with wet mud

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Tables set

Blue and gold and white

Guest gather… waiting for the bride

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Proud father

Escorts his daughter

Groom and Grandparents beam with pride

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It is the gathering of oneness that matters

Raindrops just make it more memorable

When the weather brings rain

you have to go with the flow

and be thankful it wasn’t snow!

Photos: Dwight L. Roth