I sit amazed that each one knows their tune
Always on pitch they sing from morn till noon.
Perhaps birds love singing only one song;
Unending melody //making her swoon.
But how does a bird hatched out of an egg?
Know what tune to sing on their tiny legs?
And why don’t they try another’s sweet song?
Getting mixed up //and from another begs
I think bird melodies are meant to blend.
Like flutes in a symphony // all join in;
With harmonized beauty they sing their song.
Each plays a part // sweet symphony begins
Today we are experimenting with writing rubaiyats with our d’Verse group. Frank is our host and asked us to write one using the one of the forms suggested.
A single ruba’i is a quatrain, a poem of four lines. If there is a collection of more than one quatrain, it is called a rubaiyat, This is what Edward FitzGerald titled his 1859 translation of Omar Khayyam’s quatrains. The pattern can be AABA or AAAA.
I am using the first pattern in my poem.
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Photos: Dwight L. Roth
Nice photos of those birds. And nice sound in the rubaiyat. It is amazing how those birds don’t get their songs confused with the songs of a different kind of bird.
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Thanks Frank! It really is when you stop and think about it!
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That was lovely! I especially liked “I think bird melodies are meant to blend
Like flutes in a symphony” A beautiful description 🙂
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Thank you so much Christine! I love the antiphonal bird calls, when they call back and forth to each other.
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Who knows what they are really saying! Beautiful!
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Yes, like listening to an instrumental piece!
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I love these lines:
“But how does a bird hatched out of an egg
Know what tune to sing on their tiny legs”
All life is a mystery, but it seems birds have more mystery than most. Nice rubaiyat!
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Thank you Jade, It is a question to ponder. Makes me wonder how anyone could think that this all just evolved over the years!
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Yes, it does make one wonder!
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A lovely Rubaiyat resounding with birdsong, Dwight. I agree that bird melodies are ‘meant to blend / Like flutes in a symphony’.
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Thanks Kim… I love sitting and listen to the sounds all around and above me in the trees.
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Delightful poem and photos!
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Thank You very much!
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You are most welcome!
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Hey Roth,
I think this is the third bird rubiayat I have read. Fun
You use the double slash often, I remember. Not sure it is my favorite (if it matters) — seems stark and in a poem about birds, especially so.
I love what you are exploring here.
The “making her swoon” seems awkward — who is the “she” and thought does not flow from previous line for me. Maybe a whole other stanza on the songs being flirtatious etc.
“beg” seems a bit forced when “borrow” comes to mind so easily.
I love the sweet symphony idea — though for me, some forests are alarmingly cacophonies. Smile.
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Thank you Sabio for you in depth evaluation. I shall look at it again. You are right beg was a bit forced. I kept it to fit the pattern rhyme. I learned slash marks here at d’verse from Bjorn. The breath and thought combination gives the reader an easier flow intended by the author. I like them better than commas or semicolins! Thanks!
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Gottcha — I guess I’d seen those same hack-hack slashes at Bjorn’s too, I forgot. BTW, I replied to your comment, don’t know if your following. Any thoughts?
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I will check it out! Thanks…
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Dwight, really love this part:
I think bird melodies are meant to blend
Like flutes in a symphony // all join in
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Thank you Grace! I appreciate your comment!
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Of course there is the mockingbird, who mimics so many others. I love the image of a symphony in perfect tune.
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Thanks, I thought about that by his calls don’t quite ring true to me!
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I love how you individualize the birds and bring them together as one. They each have a special voice that contributes to the symphony.
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Thank you Astrid, It is amazing how many different bird songs there are …
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Personally, I think all creation was made to only “sing one song” with the exception of humans: we are given the opportunity to same and think and sing about whatever we want. Far too often we squander this unique gift. (This is my opinion of course)
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Very good! I would agree. We should sing more and fight less!!
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Wonderful images Dwight and I too believe birds melodies blend naturally with one another 🙂🐦🎶
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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This was wonderful Dwight. Great job composing with the 10-syllable line. I love the sounds of birds. I think a mocking bird as well as a mina bird can mimic other birds. Never heard either. I got inspired by this rubaiyat thing and posted two – one dark, one light. Both of mine follow Frost’s 8-syllable line format.
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We have mocking birds around here, but I don’t hear them too often. I enjoyed reading both of your poems.
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Thank you Rob for you kind comments!
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Nicely done, and on a topic close to my heart. How, indeed, do they know which tune to sing?
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Thank you very much for your comment! Always more questions… still looking for answers!
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Me too!
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I’m especially fond of the meadowlark, robin, and redwinged blackbird melodies all different. And they sing after every rain.
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They are beautiful!
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Now this is a wonderful metaphor. So many different birds and yet when their songs are lifted to the sky, they all blend into one symphony! Would that humanity could recognize the lesson here.
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Thank you Lillian for your kind words! I agree, as advanced as we are we still haven’t mastered the art of getting along together in harmony!
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how does a bird know how to sing one particular song? a lovely question to ponder.
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Yes, that is an interesting question! Thanks Gina.
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Reminds me of a photo on Frank Hubeny’s blog called ‘birds minding their own business’ which made me laugh! Guess it’s why they don’t bother about another bird’s song, keeping to their own and happy with it. There’s no jealousy, no wanting what another has. Gotto love ’em! You wrote a very sweet rubayiat.
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Thanks so much for your kind words. Yes birds tend to mind their own business and even share the feeder with others at time. Quite unlike the squirrels that won’t even share among themselves.
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That is beautifully written. I think we are all brought into this world destined to sing OUR one song, dancing to the beat of everyone else’s.
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I think you are right! Thanks for your kind affirmation!
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You are welcome.
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I do love how you used questions in the second quatrain, I think that is the one that could be a single poem. Personally I think I would have preferred a few question marks in it… but I leave that to you.
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Thank you for your suggestions. I will go back and look at revisions and additions. I am not sure what you mean by a single poem?
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What I like the most is the pondering of one detail of nature. We can be forever inquisitive as there’s so much to explore. Such an interesting question to ask. A lovely rubaiyat!
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Thank you Mish! I appreciate your comment. So much to see and so much more to say!!
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Lovely, Dwight. I love the questioning about birds and song–and the thought of them all joining in to sing together. (Do you want to add an s to beg so that it rhymes with legs?)
Years ago I did just a bit of research on how birds learn to sing for a test-writing project I was working on. It was really interesting. One thing that I remember is that song birds often have dialects or accents, so a New Jersey robin and S. Carolina robin might have different accents just like people do.
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Thank You! I love your added info on the bird songs. I will check the correction.
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I think I’ve actually heard some NPR stories about bird song–and you’re welcome.
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