The Old Man of the Mountain
“You must see it,” Robert told Jen. “It’s breathtakingly beautiful sitting five thousand feet above sea level. The rock formation looks just like an old man in repose. That is why they call it Grandfather Mountain.”
The more he talked, the more excited she became. “And there is a mile-high swinging bridge stretching from the gift shop to the foot of the climb. It is made of metal and anchored with thick steel cables keeping it from swinging too much on windy days.”
As they drove along, Jen’s mind floated in and out trying to visualize what he was telling her. Winding their way up the narrow road, they arrived at the gift shop. The view was spectacular.
As they sat atop the “Old Man’s” head, Jen turned to Robert and said, “In space in time I sit, thousands of feet above the sea.”
Photos of Grandfather Mountain in North Carolina: Dwight L. Roth
Today at d’Verse, we are writing prosery, which is a flash fiction piece of 144 words that must include a given line from a poem in the story. Merril gave us this line:
“In space in time I sit thousands of feet above the sea.”
From May Sarton, “Meditation in Sunlight”
Join us at: https://dversepoets.com
A beautiful place to visit.
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Yes, very inspiring to see!
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Reblogged this on From guestwriters.
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Beautiful Dwight! I think this is gorgeous! ❤
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Thank you Carol Anne. It is a great place to visit. We did not climb to the top. Getting too old for that!
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A good story, but I’ll take Robert’s word for it
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Ha ha… yes. We only made it to the bridge!
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It sounds like an amazing place, Dwight! Thanks for sharing.
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It is a grand place to visit in the NC mountains! Thank you, Merril!
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You’re welcome, Dwight!
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I can see his face! Enjoyed this virtual trip up there! 💗
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Thank you!
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my pleasure! 🥰
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Beautiful the mediative nature of this piece and the lovely imagery throughout! ❤
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Thank you so much, Layla!
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I didn’t know that North Carolina has its own “Old Man.”
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Yes. It is quite popular! And I don’t think it is going to collapse anytime soon!
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😀
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My mother’s employer once had a home on Grandfather Mountain, and some of the pictures he showed us from his property there were stunning. I’ve never been there, but I suspect it offers some of the most fantastic views there are.
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That would be a great place to have a home. The views are wonderful!
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That sounds like an amazing place to visit.
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It really is a most interesting spot in NC.
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Well done. Lovely piece of writing.
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Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Sounds like it takes a lot more courage and stamina than I have these days!
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