When my time has come and I am gone
Take my ashes and paint me in the shadows
Under the oak tree where memories were made…
In the shadows with the fungi and let me watch it grow
And feel the coolness of the wind floating through the leaves
*
When my time has come and I am gone
Brush me smoothly under rocks of overhanging cliffs.
Paint me in the shadows where cool water
Trickles its way gurgling neath the trees
And deer quench their thirst on hot summer days
*
When my time has come and gone
Blend my ashes onto boardwalk pilings.
Paint me in the shadows where I can hear
Excited children walking as the waves roll in
Splashing in the shadows and rolling out again
*
When my time has come and gone
Take me to the farm I loved so long ago
Paint me in the shadows of the furrows
Of rich dark dirt to nourish alfalfa roots
growing green and tall in the summer sun
*
When my time has come and gone
Paint me in the shadows of garden rocks
Where Zinnias grow tall to shade me
While bees and hummingbirds come and go
And little Wrens keep me alert with their song
*
When my time has come and I am gone
And my pigment has turned gray
Paint me in shadows of your memory
and I’ll be here to stay
*
Posting for Open Link night at d’Verse Poets Pub. Some winter reflections.
Join us at: https://dversepoets.com
This is so sad but beautiful. You will be missed by those who knew you best.
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And remembered by them as well! Thank you very much!
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❤ ❤ ❤ and there you shall be ❤
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Ha ha… time will tell! :>)
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Such a poignant conclusion. Loved this one, Dwight 🙂
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Thank you very much, Paula!
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This is so beautifully written. It brought tears to my eyes. I see someone speaking it as ashes are strewn. Thank you for sharing. It is special.
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Thank you so much! It must be the rainy winter weather today. Sets my mind off in rabbit trails!
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I rarely share a post. Hope you don’t mind as I shared this to my page. Didn’t want it to get lost.
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You are welcome to share my work along with the credits. Thank you for sharing!
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And befittingly you have painted a wonderful picture of your world to rest in Dwight
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Thank you my friend! And big as I am, there might be enough ashes to scatter and paint! LOL
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I’ll bring a wide paint brush …
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Ha ha! Sounds good! I will count on that!
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wow, Dwight! This is so vivid, a beautiful poem! You are very talented. Oh and, I have been meaning to ask you…you know the poetry book you recently sent me, do you have others, if so would love to have copies of them, so I can read and review them all! email me the books please if you don’t mind
manyofus1980@gmail.com
xoxoxoxoxo ❤ ❤
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Thank you, Carol Anne! I do have more books. I will send send you another one!
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I LOVE this poem, Dwight! I think it’s one of your best.
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Thanks for your kind words, Liz! Thoughts for a rainy winter day! I am so glad you enjoyed it.
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You’re welcome, Dwight!
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Right to the heart with your beautiful words! Thanks for sharing, Dwight. 😎❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you very much. …and you are very welcome!
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WOW Dwight, what a soul-stirring memorable poem my friend. Love the imagery of looming in the shadows…marking a place for a heartwarming presence.🥰💖😘
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Thank you so much my friend! Some of my favorite spots!
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Great locations indeed, hidden in plain sight!!! 🥰💐😘
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That’s me!! :>) :>)
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😂😜🤣
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My goodness this is such a heart-stirring poem, Dwight! 💖💖
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Thank you Sanaa!
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Beautiful, Dwight!
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Thank you Rosaliene!
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some great spots to hang out, love this one!! 👏👏
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Thank you Tricia! Some of my favorite!
Hope you and your husband are feeling better!
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I’m doing good, but my husband just had another surgery on his knee to scrape out scar tissue from knee replacement, so he’s a little out of it. Fun times when you get old! 😆
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What an exquisite poem, Dwight! ❤ Beautiful sentiments that are meaningful to me!
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Thank you, Cheryl. I am glad you found it meaningful to you!
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This poem evokes great peace, acceptance, and unity. Meaningful work, Dwight.
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Thank so much, Michele. I appreciate your kind comment!
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I enjoyed your poem and paired photo. Thank you!
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Thank you. I love the shadows in the photo as well!
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Absolutely, yes!
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A little sadness but still filled with love and joy. Love the repetition of: paint me in the shadows.
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A little different twist on end of life actions! Thank you, Grace, for your kind comment.
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This is so gorgeous Dwight. When your time has gone, if it’s before mine. I will paint all of your ashes all over the sky and land and send you a wish to the heavens where you land! LOVE your poem. 💗
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That is such a nice thing to say, Cindy. I love all of your sentiments! I will be look for each one of them! Thank you! :>)
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You’re so welcome dear Dwight. You color our world here always! 💗 Bless you all Ways always! 💗
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Thank you, Cindy! And you too!! :>)
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💗🙏🏼💗
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So beautiful and poignant. A bit haunting, and so real.
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A poignant piece, Dwight…..so beautifully penned. The repetition of “Paint me in the shadows” is very soothing. I think nature is such a welcome place for our bodies to blend in after moving on from this world.
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Thank you so much, Mish. I agree. Back to nature seems very natural!
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You carry us in ether to these heavens. How beautifully done
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Thank you very much! I am glad it connected with you!
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What a perfect poem for groundhog’s day when shadows superstitiously tell stories. Your word shadow images are so beautiful! Paint me in those shadows, too!
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Thank you, Jan. I hadn’t thought of that, but you are right. I think it was overcast in PA yesterday, no shadow! We can wish for an early spring!
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So beautiful Dwight
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Thank you, Sadje!
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My pleasure
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beautifully moving without a sign of sickly sentiment – a most memorable poem Dwight especially that line repeat
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Thank you for your kind words, Laura. The repeat helped keep it all in focus. I am glad it connected with you.
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Absolutely beautifully done 💞💞💞
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Thank you so much! I am glad it connected with you.
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Beautiful, Dwight. So poignant. That repeated phrase is so effective. 💙
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Thank you, Merril. It does keep the poem focused. I apprecaite your commment.
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You’re very welcome, Dwight!
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A very moving poem.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome.
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This is so beautiful and peaceful. To be painted in the shadows is a wonderful idea. (K)
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Thank you very much! It is a thought that came to me yesterday that I decided to pursue!
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Beautiful Dwight, so evocative & bittersweet! 👌👌❤️❤️👏👏 So, many wonderful descriptions & images I don’t know where to start.
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Thank you, Ken, for your kind words. It is bittersweet to look face to face with our mortality. I appreciate your comment.
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Indeed! 👍💯 And, you’re most welcome! 😁🙏😊
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A fine spread, Dwight
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Thank you Derrick! Seems like a comfortable rest!
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This is profound and soul-touching …. I do give deep thought to the afterlife, what and where and how I hope to be remembered / placed / honored.
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What a beautifully written piece, Dwight. Bittersweet as is life, itself.
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Thank you, Eugenia! Yes, I agree!
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You’re welcome, Dwight!
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I love this so much, Dwight. It brought tears to my eyes. So lovely. ❤
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Thank you very much. I am so glad it connected with you. I appreciate your kind words.
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I so love the way the title plays through this poem and lends to the lovely imagery! ❤
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Thank you so much for your kind comment! As an amateur painter, the idea of turning ashes into paint pigment, and spreading it around, seemed like a great idea!
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Great, thought-provoking message here, Dwight. I too loved the repeated usage of the first line. A reset button of sorts for the next, new image to be contemplated.
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Thank you, Bruce! I am glad it connected with you. My mind just wandered on and on.
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Thank you!
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Such a lovely way to become part of the present after you’ve come and gone. Nice imagery you’ve painted here.
Pat
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Thank you very much!
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I like the thought of the ashes being spread in several places that meant the most… I can see those left behind making a journey to all your favorite places.
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That would be great to think that could happen.
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