I hear the hounds of winter
just beyond the ridge
Chasing that cold Alberta Clipper
as it comes roaring down upon us,
bringing the cold weather blues.
And we are trapped under ice,
leaving footprints in the snow.
For love, like winter.
has its cold spells too.
And if we make it through December…
through a hazy shade of winter
Roses from snow will emerge.
So let it go
leave the winter things behind,
and sing your love song
from the white winter hymnal,
“I’ve got my love to keep me warm.”
Photo of Roses taken this morning 12/6: Dwight L. Roth
Today at d‘Verse, Lillian gave us a list of song titles about winter and asked us to write a poem incorporating at least two of the titles in our poem. I decided to play with the list and see how many I could use. I think I have used all but four of sixteen.
** If you want to know who sang the songs in dark print, go to our site: https://dversepoets.com for the list.
Well….if you were in the room with me, you would have heard me say very loudly, after reading your poem, “WOW! HE REALLY DID WELL” at which point my husband in the other room said, “A really good one, huh?” And I said, “Oh yes!”
Just a great write, using the song titles so well….it just flowed. LOVE it!
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How sweet of you to send me accolades! I love it. Thank you so much Lillian. I am glad you enjoyed it!
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Bravo Dwight. Luv this poem.
Much💜love
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Thank you so much, Gillena!
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You have captured the winter wonderland with your writer’s wand, Dwight …
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Thank you my friend. Now you will have to write the Spring Version using Leonard Cohan song titles!
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A nice idea Dwight…
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:>) Go for it!
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Beautiful poetry 💙
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Thank you very much, Paula!
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You know, I can almost hear Bing Cosby (or these days Michael Bublé) crooning this one to the ladies and hearts melting right and left! Have you ever thought of songwriting as a career move?!! And did you really use all but two of the prompts? So good. 😍
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Thank you so much, my friend! You made me chuckle out loud! Maybe in my next life! Ha ha!
As I have recounted, I believe it is eleven of sixteen!
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Wow! What an impressive response to a challenging set of prompts! Good job!! ❤️
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Thank you, Jan, this poem was a flash back to our earlier ending lines poem. This time it was song titles with some flexibility.
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I love your use of metaphor in this one!
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Thank you, Liz! That cold Alberta clipper hit some of us harder than others.
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You’re welcome, Dwight!
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Great poem. I especially felt this line: “For love, like winter./has its cold spells too.”
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Thank you for your comment. Yes, a word of wisdom that comes from experience. Thankfully like the seasons it can warm up again!
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That was fantastic use of the song titles. I think you rocked this one!
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Thank you, Truedussa, for your kind words. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
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Well done.
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Thank you very much!
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Most welcome
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Good job, Dwight!
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Thank you, Lisa.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Beautiful writing, Dwight! Love the call to action and your photo. 🌹
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Thank you very much, Michele! I am amazed that I still have roses trying to bloom in December!
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You are welcome. That is incredible!
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wow, wow, wow!
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This is fantastic, Dwight! I love the tone of all your poems, and it’s amazing how you used so many of the song titles in this one.
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Thank you for your kind words, Tammy! I am so glad you enjoyed it.
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You’ve made a nice analogy of this
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Thank You Derrick. I enjoyed seeing what could be done with these titles!
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Wonderful! So well done, Dwight, it is beautiful. ❤️
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Thank you so much, Punam!
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Wow! I love this, Dwight! Beautifully written piece and the roses are exquisite.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. It was an interesting challenge and came together even better than I had anticipated.
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A Gorgeous post, Dwight. The roses are stunning! Your poem is both beautiful and meaningful. Bravo! ❤
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Thank you so much Cheryl. I am shocked to find roses still trying to bloom in this cold fall season. We have had only a few nights of hard frost, but it has been warmer than some years.
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Nicely done, Dwight.
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Thank you Ken.
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Excellent, Dwight. I love the metaphor. Well done!
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Thank you so much, Merril. I had fun with this one.
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You’re very welcome, Dwight.
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You worked the lines in so perfectly. I really enjoyed this, Dwight!
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Thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate your kind words.
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beautiful. I shared this on Twitter.
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Thank very much for your comment and for sharing it! I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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This is beyond beautiful, Dwight! 😀 I love how seamlessly the titles flow in this poem 💘💘
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Thank you, Sanaa, for your kind words. I had some good practice earlier in the week with Laura’s prompt of end lines! It was a fun challenge.
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We need that type of warmth… snow is here, we just have to sustain it until warmth is here again.
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Brrr you really do have a long winter! Perhaps you appreciate summer more than we do as a result!
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This flowed beautifully ,3
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Thank you very much for your comment!
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Those titles came together nicely, this was well put together, I like how you highlighted the titles and the transitions were related perfectly. I especially enjoyed your opening, setting the stage for the inbetween and ending. Nicely done, you always rock these challenges ✍️
“I hear the hounds of winter
just beyond the ridge
Chasing that cold Alberta Clipper”
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Thank you so much for your kind words! It was a fun challenge for me. I love doing this kind of poetry.
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Beautiful poem,Dwight. Well done ♥️
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Thank you very much!
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Pleasure 🤗
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Each line sings beautifully.
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Thank you very much Eunice. I love the way you put it!
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You are welcome.
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Excellent use of this prompt, Dwight. The photo is spectacular!
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Rose is not only amongst the most beautiful and admired flowers with a number of uses, but also one of the most primitive flowers in subsistence. Rose has its numerous uses in manufacturing of perfumes, essential oils, rose water and other cosmetics. Rose fossil vestiges date back over thirty five million years. It was discovered in Colorado, North America, Europe and Asia. Apart from ordinary regular usages, roses have had their abundant usage in the medicinal sectors.
https://www.indianetzone.com/41/uses_rose.htm
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