After reading the blogpost *“Existence of Sand”, I began thinking further on the subject from a little different perspective. These are my thoughts.
Knowing Our Limitations
Children build castles in the sand
Knowing they won’t last
Washed away in the high tide
Walls and moats and shells
do not stop the tide from wiping
the shore clean
And the next day
they do it all over again
Just like children we create our castles
full of detail and embellishments
Building walls around us
we seek protection
from fear, war, and destruction
We buy guns thinking they will protect us
Move into clustered communities
of people just like ourselves
Erecting monuments
we hope to be remembered
forever
But just like grains of sand
these too will go
The high tide hits us all in time
Wiping the slate clean
over and over
again and again
And someone else will build
their castle on our shore
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A very insightful poem! Kudos to the poet!!
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Your affirmation is much appreciated, Liz!
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Such beautiful imagery and life connections for all of us Dwight. I love this.
These lines:
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“Erecting monuments
we hope to be remembered
forever
But just like grains of sand
these too will go”
What I love is that it matters not how long we stay but that we were there! lovely! 💖💖
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Thank you so much, Cindy for your insightful comments. Yes, you are right… Make the most of the journey!
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Dwight, I find your poem deeply thoughtful and true. As well as beautiful.
Yes to building sand castles over and over again.
Miriam
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Thank you very much. I am so glad it connected with you… and yes we do tend to build knowing they won’t last.
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You’re so welcome my friend. That’s the best we can do!
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Yes!
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The cycle of life – beautifully rendered in words. ❤️
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Thank you so much!
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A beautiful and insightful poem, Dwight! Remembering that life is short should help us choose our priorities. Your poem is an excellent reminder. 🙂
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Thanks Cheryl. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Beautifully put/love your choice of imagery…Nothing lasts forever.
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Thank you very much! The seashore is just what this poem needed!
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A beautiful and insightful poem, Dwight. So true. As Karima says: “Nothing lasts forever.”
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That seems to be the case!
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There is much wisdom in this well-crafted verse, Dwight! 🌞
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Thank you so much, Lisa! I appreciate your kind words.
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Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thank you Michael!
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That is a great philosophical approach. Wonderful! Let’s hope we are not the kids damaging this all by ourselves, without any influence of the nature. Thanks for sharing, Dwight. Have a good week arriving! xx Michael
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This is the truth exactly, Dwight.
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David
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Thank you very much for your comment, David. The older I get the more real this becomes for me.
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Children do know how to experience joy in the present. Beautiful to behold! Enriching and insightful thoughts. ✨
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Yes, they do. Thank you for your kind comments!
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You are welcome, Dwight!
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Very wise words
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Thank you very much Derrick!
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Lovely lines, Dwight! What an adorable response poem! So beautiful and so realistic! There is nothing permanent in this world that you have expressed so meaningfully. That’s a perspective that I truly appreciate. Thank you 😊
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Thank you Kaushal. I am so glad you enjoyed my response poem. Thank you for the inspiration. It made me dig a little deeper than usual!
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You’re more than welcome, Dwight!
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A wonderful and insightful piece, Dwight! Thank you for the link to Kaushal Kishore.
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Wise words by one wise man, truly beautiful words Dwight.
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Yes! super poem Dwight! And I agree! 🙂
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Thank you very much! I guess you know more about this than many of the rest of us! Thanks, Carol Anne!
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