Carrie woke to her cell phone lit up and vibrating on the nightstand. It was a text that simply said,
” It’s ready!”
“Please call ASAP.”
She had been waiting anxiously for the past two months for this call. Three times a week, as Carrie sat hooked up to the dialysis machine, she dreamed of this day.
This was an experiment she volunteered for over a year ago. Researchers at Wake Forest University finally perfected a way to take tissue from her bad kidney, isolate the good cells, and grow a new healthy kidney. It would eliminate the rejection factor.
But would it work?
Many anxious thoughts raced through her mind as she stared at the phone. “For how can I be sure I shall see again the world on the first of May?” she wondered.
There were no guarantees, she would be the first.
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Today at d’Verse, Merril gave us this prosery prompt:
“For how can I be sure
I shall see again
The world on the first of May”
–From “May Day” by Sara Teasdale
We are to take this line from the poem and include it in a flash fiction piece of 144 words. My story inspiration came form a PBS show where are Wake Forest Research doctor talked about this kind of thing being studied. In time they will be able to grow new organs from your own body tissue. How amazing is that!
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What a clever take on the story Dwight. Good job. Yayyyy for Carrie. I do hope it goes well!
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:>) Thank you Cindy! I am glad you enjoyed it.
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You’re so welcome Dwight!! 💖
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Unusual flash fiction. Very creative, Dwight! ❤
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Thank you, Cheryl. I wanted to do something different! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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Different and delightful!
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Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it!
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Well done Dwight. It was a tricky prompt but you placed it perfectly in your story ☺️
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Thank you, Christine! I appreciate your kind affirmation.
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Truly fascinating. I read an article awhile back where they are using 3D printers with the person’s own cells to make replacement organs. I do think we will see the day, at least for the “hardware” body parts. Maybe they will be able to import our brain data into computer chips? Scary thought!
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Wow, I never thought about that… our brain on a flash stick! Thanks Lisa!
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You’re welcome, Dwight.
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Tense prosery, Dwight. What a perfect use of the prompt.
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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I did, indeed.
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Oh wow! This is gripping flash fiction. Great work, Dwight!
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Thank you, Michele! I thought the concept was amazing! I am glad you liked it.
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Yes, fascinating. Very good!
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Amazing story Dwight. And the prompt line well fitted.
Thanks for dropping by to read mine.
Much💛love
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Thank you Gillena! and you are welcome!
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You never fail to inspire with your poetic prowess!!
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Thank you, Jan! I like to write things that mean something, not just form correctness!
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WOW! This felt like a prologue of a rather interesting sci-fi or medical novel!
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There you go… Take it and run with it!! :>) Thank you so much for your comment!
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Flash sci-fi done with flair, Dwight! What an excellent take.
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Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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I did! You are welcome.
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Very well done
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Thank you, Derrick,!
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So well done, Dwight! Thank you for sharing the story–and the possibility. It truly is amazing.
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Thank you very much Merril. Things we once thought impossible are not used on daily basis. I can imagine the same will be true for our grandchildren.
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I hope so–but only good things!
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I really hope their research gets through, so many life’s could be save then. You’ve done this one so brilliantly Dwight.
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Thank you, Daphny. I appreciate your kind words.
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You’re most welcome, Dwight
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Wow, Dwight – this is so out-of-the-box and well written! Fantastic 🙂
-David
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Thank you so much, David. I am glad you liked it.
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If this would work it would be amazing… but I will forever be distrustful after hearing about Paolo Macchiarini
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paolo_Macchiarini
If there is the ego of the doctor behind I will always be distrustful
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Thank you! Hopefully it will happen in time.
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The phrase brilliantly incorporated in this positive…we hope…tale
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Thank you, Ain, for your comment. It would be amazing to see this happen.
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Wonderful piece! The prompt certainly gave us all a sense of mortality that many people contemplate daily.
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Thank you Susan. It really does make us stop and think. This would be a wonderful thing if they could perfect it!
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Having had a friend die waiting for a kidney…what a wonderful thing that would be. (K)
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Thank you. It is still years from happening, but no doubt will happen at some point.
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Thank you for reposting this one!
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