Last summer we had a nest of baby wrens that hatched nearby. The little ones would come to the feeder and shimmy and shake expecting the mother to pick up the food and feed them. As their feathers were coming in, they looked a little disheveled! They did not look very happy and their songs where begging tunes! Once grown, they joined their parents in that high pitched song that makes you wonder how that much sound could come from such a little bird.
Hatchling begs for food
Feathers unkempt all awry
Not a joyful sound
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Photo: Dwight L. Roth
Today at d’Verse, Frank Tassone asked us to write a Haibun that refers to bird songs. We enjoy watching the birds at our feeder as they come and go. The little wren gets so loud at times we have to shut the door!
Definitely looks like a BWA (Bird With Attitude).
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Ha ha… yes, not one to mess with!
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😀
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Thank you, Dwight, for this delightful picture and your poem and a tale.
Joanna
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A little smile for your Monday! You are welcome!
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That was nice..not a good sound…! That made me chuckle…
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Ha ha… glad to give you a chuckle, Ain. Thank you!
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Your haibun is very sad but full of hope. Hang in there. You site would not take likes or comments!
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Delightful post! I often wonder how birds make the sounds they do. I am treated to a bird orchestra every morning. 🌞
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Thank you. It is a good question. Spring in the desert is probably bird heaven!
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You are welcome. Yes, you are right! 🥰
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oh these poor little Wrens Dwight! One’s only a mother could love.. lol 😂
It’s the crows that get me! 😂💖
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Ha ha… you are right! And they seem to. Crows can be a pest!
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hahahah I’lll say.. oh so much so!! 💖💖
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They are rather comical too, while they’re singing their little bird hearts out. 🎶💖🎵 But, that’s what they do!!! 🦜🦅🐦
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Yes they are… I love to watch them also. Sometimes they take a dip in our plate of water! A good examples for us all to follow!
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Oh so true Dwight!!! 🥰🦜🤗
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Very interesting haibun.
Luv the surprise of the unjoyful.
Much💛love
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Ha… sometimes that happens!
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“their songs where begging tunes!” I love that.
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Aw, Dwight. He’s a little cutie though with a high pitched sound and cute ruffles! Perfect haiku!
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I thought he was adorable!
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Yes!!
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Love your Haibun. The wren’s song is not as troublesome to me as our magpies who chase away our songbirds.
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Some birds are bullies, just like us humans! :>(
Thanks Jan!
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This hits all the right notes, Dwight!
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Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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Those hungry little ones can get very loud as their parents search for food to feed them.
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They are so fun to watch! They shimmy and shake like they are the only thing important in the world… and for their parents I guess they are just that!
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“Once grown, they joined their parents in that high pitched song that makes you wonder how that much sound could come from such a little bird.” – Haha, how cute!
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Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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No sound quite like an angry, hungry hatchling, is there?
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They are just like little kids, always expecting more and more!
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This was endearing to read Dwight! 🙂 and what a great pic of the little Wren. I sometimes feel like that sweet little guy feels… 😉 Wonderful post. 👍🏼✌🏼❤️
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*rather, feel like he looks
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Ha ha… me too! Hopefully we are still singing a sweet song!
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Thank you Rob! It was a lucky shot! I love his expression.
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Got to admit, no one sounds nice when they are hungry. HAHA. this is adorable, Dwight!
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Ha ha… you are right! Just ask my wife! :>)
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hahahha
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Absolutely not always a joyful song! Great haibun!
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Thank you Mary! :>)
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Aww! That poor wren! Such a wonderful write, Dwight.
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Thank you so much, David!
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My pleasure.
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OOPs I see I renamed you! Sorry about that!
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Children–the same everywhere! (K)
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Adorable little creatures, disheveled and all….
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Thanks Mish… it really is…
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I think your wren is a teenager, Dwight! 🙂 Very sweet photo. ❤
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Ha ha… I think you are right! :>)
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Crying is a survival instinct! It’s true in human kids and animal kids! Love you photo and poem, Dwight. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Miriam. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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You’re welcome, Dwight.
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Noise of the baby wrens made me laugh. Not all birdsong is conducive to the sensitive ear!
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Thank you. I am glad it made you laugh.
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It takes some learning to master the songlines.
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:>) yes!
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