It seeps and creeps with time
deleting pictures and rhymes
Retention is lost
in Winter’s cold frost
While minds become filled with green slime
Today at d’Verse, Bjorn asked us to write a poem that is a riddle, making the reader try to guess what we are talking about. I decided to write about Alzheimer’s disease that slowly eats away at one’s memory till in time it is gone. When I finished my limerick, it took me back to Simon and Garfunkle’s song “Slip Slidin’ Away,” which some of you will remember.
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Alzheimer’s is probably the worst slip sliding of all, so, so cruel.
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Yes, I agree. It really is a thief of memories!
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Slip slidin’ away, is the perfect line to accompany your poem, Dwight. It made me think of another song:
Long ago, it must be, I have a photograph/ Preserve your memories; They’re all that’s left you.
Till even that is gone…
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Thank you Peter for your comment. Yes your song lines say it well. We seem to lose it from the present back, with childhood the last to go.
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Memories.
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Oh! Love your riddle poem.
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Thank you Helen… something we know something about!
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A solid riddle about a cruel disease. 😢 Your song is appropriately paired. 👍🏻
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Thank you, Michele. It is a sad and destructive culprit!
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You are welcome, Dwight. Yes, it is.
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Retention is lost
While minds become filled with green slime
Those two lines lead me to = MEMORY
MUCH💛LOVE
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yes, it does… Alzheimer’s steals it all it seems! Thank you Gillena.
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An touching and accurate description of Alzheimer’s Dwight … my mum had Alzheimer’s …
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Such a horrible and insidious foe! I love the song, it was one of my mum’s favourites…
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All types of dementia are helped by music and singing. It awakes the memory, improves significantly brain function, and changes the perspective on life.
Joanna
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Does it prepare one better for the next round?
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come Enjoy Dwight’s Verse and The Song!!!
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Ah, too sadly common to mistake. Good job with the pen!
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The poem was very finely done, but tough lines to read…
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Thank you Ain… yes it could happen to any of us in time!
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Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Thank you for reposting!
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🙏 Thank you as well for great thoughts. Enjoy a great weekend! xx Michael
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Thank you Michael… and you too.
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As sad the disease, as beautiful the poem. Thanks, Dwight! Have a beautiful weekend! xx Michael
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Thanks Michael! It is a mixed bag!
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Such an insidious disease! Well done, Dwight.
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Thank you… yes it is!
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This is powerfully unsettling Dwight — strong write!
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Thank you, Rob… I have watched it happen! And… you are right
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Oh how sad Dwight. 😧😢
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Yes, it is not easy to watch one experience this loss!
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I know I have seen it too 😢
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:<( Very sad!
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Memory?
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Yes!
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🙂 ❤
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This is finely written, a disease like Alzheimer’s no one should go through.
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It is a terrible disease …
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Yes it is…
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