Grace sat quietly in her wheelchair on the long veranda facing the valley below. It was a quiet place, except for the Cardinal who kept singing to his mate and the tiny Carolina wren whose piccolo voice made up for his size.
Her mind wandered as she sat waiting for her sweet granddaughters to show up for their Sunday visit. She thought about her life and all the places she had visited and the interesting people she met along the way. Tom was a free-spirit and the two of them always envisioned the next place they might visit. “Talk what you please of future spring and sun-warm’d sweet tomorrow.” She had lived her life with exuberance and joy. This is what she wanted to impress upon her sweet granddaughters as well.
“Hi, Grandma! What a beautiful view you have out here on the porch.”
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Today at d’Verse, Sanaa gave us a prosery prompt form Christina Rossetti. We are to write a flash fiction of 144 words using this quote: “Talk what you please of future spring and sun-warm’d sweet tomorrow.” – from the poem A Daughter of Eve by Christina Rossetti.
Join us at: https://dversepoets.com
Photo: Dwight L. Roth
What a beautiful view.
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Thank you. It is one of a kind!
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Yes, it is.
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“She had lived her life with exuberance and joy. This is what she wanted to impress upon her sweet granddaughters as well.”💕 Beautiful💕
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I enjoyed the view and your prosery in equal measure. Very uplifting!
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Thank you, Liz. I try to keep a balance in my writing. Glad you enjoyed this beautiful view!
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You’re welcome, Dwight!
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Wonderful post, Dwight! Engaging story and lovely photo. ❤
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Thank you very much, Cheryl.
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A view has merit and worth. Being old in the city can be depressing, with a view of McDonald’s or the brick wall in the alley.
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You did a great job blending the prompt into your rendering of memories. Beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Jan!
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They seem to have such a happy and fine life going for them all
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Yes, they do. Thank you very much!
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They are blessed to have visiting granddaughters, and they are blessed to have loving grandparents.
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Not everyone is so fortunate! Thank you Lisa.
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You’re welcome, Dwight.
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Oh so sweet! I loved where you went with this Dwight! Such a great prose piece!
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Thank you, Carol Anne. It is a message we need to share with our children.
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A lovely prosery indeed!
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Thank you very much, Carol!
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What a beautiful grateful story and a wonderful message to pass on to future generations
Much💜love
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Thank you Gillena!
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Somehow, time spent with grandparents becomes a backdrop to so much that happens later.
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There is a lot of influence from them on the younger generation! Thank you, Reena,.
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Beautifully done
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Thank you, Derrick, I appreciate your comments!
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This is incredibly sweet and gentle, Dwight 🙂
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David
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Thank you, David! We need so sweet and gentle at times to compensate for all the awful things happening in other parts of the world.
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Such a beautiful write, Dwight and a lovely photo!
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Thank you so much for your comment!
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You are welcome.
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What a beautiful way to re-visit memories and the view is just splendid.
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Thank you, Daphny! It is a really beautiful place!
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You’re most welcome, Dwight!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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A wonderfully serene scene, Dwight. A great sense of peace and calmness.
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Thank you, Ain. I hope you will be able to find this kind of peace again when the conflict comes to an end.
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I loved this.. so much love and contentment… forgetting the wheelchair for grandchildren and a view
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The ideal world… too bad it is not always this way. Thank you very much!
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Just a wonderful use of the line. The serenity is in the image…and in your words.
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Thank you, Lillian. I appreciate your comment.
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What a sweet moment you have captured here, reflections of a life well spent and the joy of a grandchild’s voice at the end is the icing on the cake!
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Thank you so much! Yes, that is what I hoped to present. Life is full of moments that matter!
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This is beautiful Dwight … and ever so poignant. Memories become more and more precious as I age .. for you as well I know.
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Thank you, Helen! Yes, they really do…. and every moment counts!
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Simple pleasures gift lessons of what matters most and your story is a beautiful reflection of that Dwight! 💖💖
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Each moment counts and collectively make a wonderful life!
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Such a breath taking view!! 😍😍
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Thank you! It is wonderful!
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