The good and the traumatic seem to find permanent residence!
Remember, words are important!
They can build up or tear down in a matter of seconds
Remember, words are remembered
Embedded in feelings they lie in our minds
Remember, words have power
Call out those who commit atrocities
Remember, words can bring peace
Offering forgiveness, hope and compromise
Remember, words make a difference
Be careful how you use them
The good and the traumatic seem to find permanent residence!
Today at d’ verse. Sarah asked us to use anaphora, repetition in poetry. She gave us a list of words to choose from and we were to pick one to use as our repetitive word. I wrote this poem this morning after responding to Michele Lee’s post, ( https://myinspiredlife.org/2022/03/26/property-dispute/comment-page-1/#comment-11521) and modified it a little to include the word remember.
This is what Wikipedia says: anaphora (Greek: ἀναφορά, “carrying back”) is a rhetorical device that consists of repeating a sequence of words at the beginnings of neighboring clauses, thereby lending them emphasis.
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Dwight, I am most honored that my poem inspired you to write your own. A beautiful response, it is. Insightful lines about the power of words and the repetition of the first and last lines emphasize an important point. Thank you. 🙏🏻✨
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You are very welcome, Michele. Your poem resonated with me as I thought about how words stick with us throughout our life! Thank you for your inspiring lines.
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Poets inspiring poets. It is a beautiful exchange! 🙏🏻
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That is always a good thing! :>)
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I like it and your words are so true. I remember some things said to me as a kid that just stuck with me. Sometimes the worst are the ones that are remembered.
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Seems they do leave an impression that sticks with us! Thank you for your comment!
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“Embedded in feelings they lie in our minds.”
“words can bring peace, offering forgiveness, hope and compromise.”
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A very insightful poetic commentary on the power for language for good and for ill.
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Thank you very much Liz for your kind comment!
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You’re welcome, Dwight!
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Yes, words are powerful indeed!
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Thank you, Carol!
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Exquisite Words Dwight …
“Pointing to another world will never stop vice among us; shedding light over this world can alone help us.” – Walt Whitman
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Thank you so much, Ivor. A very apt quote!
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Yes, words can be good or bad. So true. Spoken words are just little air vibrations, but powerful vibrations.
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And… they resonate for centuries!
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You’re right. Whatever we say, whatever we write, can harm or build. Words are powerful tools.
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Yes, twisted truth is the worst of all!
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I very much agree. 👍🙏
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Your writing has this remarkable way of reaching right inside of a person..
Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Thank you, Sheri, for your kind affirmation! I really appreciate your comments~
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It really is my pleasure, you write beautifully. 💐
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:>)
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It is a beautiful piece..and I love this style of writing.
Wonderful 💕👏👏
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Thank you Kirti! It is an interesting way to get your message across!
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Profound!
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Thank you, Reena,!
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So true, Dwight. Words can be very powerful and important. They can affect lives for good or bad.
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Words of wisdom … from a man who knows the full implication of how words can hurt/support/inspire/encourage/destroy.
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Thank you, Helen, We have been through it all!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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We do need to call out those who commit atrocities. I loved the way you framed your poem with “The good and the traumatic seem to find permanent residence!” Words can really stick.
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I believe this is true for all of us as we look back over our lives. Thank you so much for your comment!
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Your words are so powerful Dwight.
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Thank you, Linda,! I believe we sometimes underestimate what our words can do.
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I totally agree.
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Absolutely.
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I have such a hard time accepting the concept of forgiveness when I watch the news today… but I do accept that the day may come when we have to give forgiveness to save ourselves.
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It is not an easy thing to do, especially when it is not reciprocated! Without it, we are carrying the baggage with us through our life!
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Powerful words about the power of words! Whoever said “sticks and stones may break my bones but words can never hurt me” was a complete idiot. “Remember, words are remembered” – perfect.
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Thank you, Sarah! You are exactly right… Words last for ever!
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The power of words often guide and determine our actions.
Nice to read you.
Best regards.
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Thank you very much! Yes, I agree!
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🤗👍
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Words are indeed the sword of this century! I love the way your words remind me poetically of the impact written word makes in an interesting and complex way. ❤
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Thank you so much for responding again. Those who know how to use words carefully get a lot done. Those who just throw them around get dismissed and ignored!
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This is gorgeously rendered, Dwight 😀 Words indeed make a difference 💝💝
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Thank you, Sanaa! Hope all is well in your part of the world!
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Late to the reading and posting too! You’re speaking to the choir, as the saying goes. Words are critically important. I think of slogans and how some work so well and others get taken the wrong way. “Defund the Police” is a perfect example. No one really meant to “defund” the police. But where is the pithy saying for “perhaps it’s time to reevaluate our budgets and policies on training and take some money and put it to mental health and social workers etc”….Or Operation Warp Speed which Trump used to describe his push for a Covid vaccine….and the push worked. But sadly, that phrase caused mistrust by many who said they didn’t trust it because it wasn’t tested enough, etc etc.
Words matter indeed.
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Thank you, Lillian, for your thoughtful response. It is amazing how words get twisted and misconstrued. Perhaps that is why there is such division in our country over Right and Left!
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Dwight, beautifully expressed. Words have such a power over our life.
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Thank you very much! Yes, they really do.
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Such good and profound wisdom. Luv this poem Dwight
Much💜love
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Thank you so much Gillena!
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That old childhood saying, “Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never harm me.” never has been true. I love your poem, Dwight. I think the saying, “The pen is mightier than the sword.” is pretty accurate. ❤
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Yes, it really is… Thank you Cheryl! Hope all is well!
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Such a bright beautiful burst to my morning and so true Dwight! Words matter and you shared it perfectly! 💕👏
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Thank you, Cindy! I think this is expecially true when blogging!
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I so agree Dwight! You’re always welcome! 💕❤️
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:>)
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I love your poem – so very true and your sunflower is lovely too 🙂
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Thank you, Gill! I thought the sunflower would be a bright spot in our world filled with turmoil! Hope all is well with you.
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Powerful and true words Dwight, no wonder it is said that pen is mightier than sword.
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Thank you, Daphny. Words are a powerful medium!
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You’re most welcome, Dwight!
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Yes words can bring huge impact in someone’s life so chose it wisely🙂
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Thank you! You are right!!
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Words truly have power and and matter and your picture just brightened my day. As you know, I’ve been filling my house in sunflowers lately! 🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻
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This beautiful flower was a volunteer that came up under my bird feeder last summer! Thank you for your thoughtful comment!
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Such a wonderful and profound piece. Thanks for sharing😄✨🌸
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind comment!
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