The Sweetest way to Die
There’s no one at home, I don’t hear a sound
Said one tiny ant to another deep under ground
No footsteps, no TV, no voices to be heard
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Tiny ants were sent out to assess the situation
Came back with the assurance, of the house’s evacuation
Time for a house party, they all shouted hurrah!
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Through cracks in the floor, windows, and walls
Tiny ants marched in and went straight to the pantry
Slipped into the Wheat Thins, and crawled in the chips
But their favorite of all, Hungry Jack’s Syrupy sip
Under the lid they squeezed through the cracks
Into that bottle of heavenly smack
*
This is so great said one to the other
So they sipped and imbibed until all were quite hyper
Drunk on the sweetness they couldn’t find their way
back out the top, so they were stuck for the day
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What will we do the tiny ants cried
How will we get out of this bottle alive
No need to worry said the tiny ant leader
This is like heaven, life couldn’t be sweeter
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So they sipped and they sighed, and then they all died
For we all know too much sugar can can kill our insides
They partied their life away in a sticky death’s dance
*
And when we arrived home, she said,
“Oh no, we have ants!”
For our Tuesday prompt at d’Verse, Sarah asked us to write about creepy crawlers. I chose tiny ants, because when we came back from our family weekend at the beach the little buggers were all in our pantry. They were so small I could barely see them. My wife found them, and so instead of sitting down to catch our breath, we had to clean out the pantry and spray for tiny ants. This is my poem from the ants point of view. How did they know we weren’t at home??
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Sweet. Love it. TY & GN 😴
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Thank you Selma!
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Wow love your take on ants, when I saw the title I was actually expecting a totally different poem possibly on life but I’m loving the way you just describe the ants, and I think we can learn one thing from the ants party which is greediness leads to nowhere 🙃❣
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Thank you very much Daphny. Yes, there is much to be learned from ants.
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You’re most welcome!
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Oh, no, what a thing to come home to! Well, at least you got a poem out of it.
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Ha ha! yes, I guess so!
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An epic tale told in poetry! I love this
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A Greek tragedy!! ha ha! Thank you so much!
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Lol! Wonderfully done, Dwight. And an important lesson there as well. If things are insolvable, resign oneself in peace and make the best of it. I once left some candy on a table and a happy string of ants marched to and fro to collect the goodies. My wife shreeked, but I could have watched them for hours, neat, labouring little creatures. I admire ants. 🙂
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Thank you so much Peter! They are most interesting to watch. I feel this way about politics much of the time… resign myself and make the best of an unsolvable situation!
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Thank you for sharing your most interesting story Peter!
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Delightful! If I were an ant, that’s probably how I’d come to my end!
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Ha ha yes for sure!
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Lol this was so cute, Dwight. A delightful take on the prompt. An ant rave is never a good thing in the pantry. 😁
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Ha ha… you are so right about that! My wife was not happy about it at all!
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This is the cuuutest thing I’ve read in the longest time! How sweet! 😍 Atleast they had a sweet death. High-quality poets can make poetry out of anything 🙂 Those ants had a sweet death and also ended up becoming your muse. This was splendid! 😍👌
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How sweet! (no pun intended) Thank you so much for you kind comments! Better to die a sweet death than a poisoned one!
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Totally! 😀
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Wonderful story. Loved it!❤️
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Thank you Grace!
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My pleasure, Dwight.❤️
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Dwight, the same thing happened to us when we got back from holiday. I love the description of these ones’ sticky end!
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No bitter end here! LOL Thanks Ingrid for sharing your comments.
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What sweetness! Enjoyed your poem 🙂
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I am sure they thought so for awhile! Thanks Rosaliene.
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Dwight,
A parable of life, except this time the ants were playing the grasshopper, sweet while it lasted! Loved the metrical charm of the tale too. :>)
pax,
dora
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Yes, sometimes even the wise fall into the trap of excess! Thank you Dora for your thoughtful comment. Not quite a sonnet, but it works for me.
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Delightful!
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Thanks Jan!
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What a way to go! But I’m with your wife…ants are not welcome in the pantry.
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Thanks Lynn! I agree.
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A delightful poem, Dwight! ❤ You could write a whole children's picture book about this experience.
When I lived in an 8th-floor condo in DC, tiny ants found their way up to the apartment. Robert and I have to store our raisins in a glass jar. Tiny ants love raisins! Who knew? Ants are enterprising and fascinating creatures, but I don't want them in my house. Fire ants are especially unwelcome in our yard for the pain they inflict! We remain at war with them. 🙂
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Thank you for sharing Cheryl! They can be a real pest at times. The thought of a story did cross my mind, but perhaps the ending would be too morbid for kids.
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Delightfully told tale, Dwight.
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure.
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wow! An ant invasion that isnt good! ❤
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Not it isn’t and they are so tiny that you can barely see them.
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Dwight, I love the term you used for syrup: “heavenly smack.” That *is* curious how they invaded when you were out of the house. They probably have lookouts stationed everywhere. You’re home is under ant surveillance!
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Little brother is watching too! Oh, no!! They are really something!
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lol love that, little brother is watching too. Not a good thing to come home to after a relaxing family vacation.
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While we are away, the ants will play…I love your “play” in words.
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Thank you Mary! They had a good time here for a couple of days!
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I think they have some secret method of communication. They always appear when we arem’t looking!
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That is for sure! We never see them, and then we are gone for three days and there they are pigging out on pancake syrup! Thanks for your comment!
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This was fun to read Dwight, though those ants weren’t laughing. 🙂
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No, but they died fat and happy! Thanks Rob, glad you enjoyed it!
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Children would love this as a story book! They wouldn’t think the ending morbid but rather that the ants ‘got their just desserts’! 😀
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Haha… just indeed! I may have to re-consider! Thank you so much for your comment!
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haha – Well, they do like their sugary foods.
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That is for sure! Thanks!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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The group mind of ants is mysteriously powerful! Thank you for this poem (and sorry that you had to clean out your pantry). Too bad one can’t rent an anteater for a few days..
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Ha ha that would be great! Thankyou for you thoughtful comment Will. Ants are amazing creatures. I can’t imagine how something as small as a pin point can function like that.
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Delightfully sweet, Dwight!
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Thanks… I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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Fantastic, Dwight! I love the idea of all the ants having a house party and then dying their death in the most heavenly way known to an ant! Hilarious 😀 A good moral too, for everyone to lay off the sugar 🙂
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Ha ha… I thought it would help lighten the situation. Ants are a real mess when they get into the food boxes. They do love the sugar. I am glad you enjoyed it!
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I did, Dwight! A very fun take 😊 I also chose ants for my write. Very different from yours 😉
Have a great day! ☀️💕
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Oh yes the ants are marching one by one and sweetness is not becoming on them. Nice poem Dwight . I use a line of peppermint essential oil around the base board and it works well.
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That sounds like a great idea. She will try that! Thank you for your suggestion. The ants can be a pain.
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you’re sooo welcome Dwight… such s pain is right. Good luck!💖
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Thank you!
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A sweet but tragic tale! LOL
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Thank you very much! A lesson for all of us!
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HAHAHAHA! 😀 🐜 Eek! 🐜 Ack! 🐜 On, No! 🐜
But, as for the ants, “What a way to go”! 😉 🐜
I’d rather they be into the food than in our pants! 😮 🐜 HA! 🐜
I hope the ants that invaded your house are now gone…hope they are on vacation to somewhere else! 🐜
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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I am so glad you liked my silly poem! It was fun to create. The ants are no longer showing up so hopefully they are under control… Thank
you so much
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