Call Me Superficial
Call me superficial when seeing a picture
Causes words to escape me
When beauty take precedence over substance
And I am drawn by what my eyes behold
Call me superficial when a picture in a story
Catches my attention and sets my mind on the fire
My imagination soars and transports my soul
To realms beyond word or pen
Call me superficial when melody and harmony
Lift my spirit from the very first note
Only to be followed by words
Adding to or taking away my feeling of awe
Call me superficial when the background blurs
Seven layers deep
And the last brush stroke is the first I see
All that work labor and toil
Only to end in an accent of light against dark
Beauty against substance
Painting: Dwight L. Roth
I decided to repost one of my favorite posts from a few years ago. It describes how I feel about life, art, and people. I have heard people say first impressions are so important. For me that is true, especially in blogging. When there are so many bloggers out there hoping to get me to read their posts, presentation is very important. Photos, paintings, titles, designs, and format are what grab me. Call me lazy, but if I have to work too hard to read your blog, I move on to one that takes less effort. That is one reason why I have not left the free WP blogging page. I don’t want you to be distracted with the sidebars and extras. Thanks for reading, liking, and commenting. I appreciate all of you more than you know.
Called talented, and wise because this is who you are, Dwight.
Joanna
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Thank you so much Joanna!
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As I read the poem, I was wondering what prompted it! And you’re definitely not superficial!!
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Thank you Liz for your great question! When I first started writing poetry, my sister would send me Mary Oliver poems, which were great. Along with the poem there were beautiful photos. The photos impressed me more than the poetry, and I thought to myself, she must think I am really superficial. I missed the great poetry for the beauty of the pictures that came along! And now you know the rest of the story!
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Oh, for Heaven’s sake! Thank you for revealing the rest of the story.
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It is interesting what inspires~
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” “I swear to you, there are divine things more beautiful than words can tell.” – Walt Whitman
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Thank you so much Ivor! I gather you could identify with my post today! And I agree with Whitman!
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He was a wise man ..
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I understand why this is one of your favorite posts. Engaging piece. An interesting use of a gorgeous photo to introduce your thoughts about being drawn to and reading (or not) other blogs. I am with you… if I have to click too many times to read content, I check out.
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Thank you Michelle! I appreciate your comment and understanding! The more followers I get the harder it is to keep up with all the followers
posts!
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Well said, Dwight.
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Thank you Ken!
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I love your poem Dwight! I appreciate you and your blog! Visit me any time! Xoxo
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Thank you so much Carol Anne. I do try to drop in from time to time!
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Balance is all, I think. This has a painting to grab attention and a verse to back it up.
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When they work together it becomes an attractive draw! Your photos and text are a great example!
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Thanks 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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good one Dwight, so uplifting! And those vivid lines of colour just light up my life 🙂
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Thank you so much Kate. I am glad it connected with you!
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definitely!
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Reading your poetry is a great way to start the day.
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What a nice thing to say, Linda! I do appreciate that you read and enjoy my posts. I really enjoy your stories as well. Hope all is well!
dwight
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Your art and your poetry speak for themselves, Dwight! You don’t need extra bells and whistles to captivate your audience.
I like a lot of fluff on my blogs but try to keep a balance. I feel Eugi’s Milieu is fairly simple and straight forward. However, since I run a prompt on Eugi’s Causerie, I need a theme that functions well. I put a lot of time and work into it and some themes help with the organization.
Keep on keepin’ on.
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Thank you Eugenia. We do what works for us. You have a beautiful blog! I appreciate your kind words.
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Most welcome!
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Dwight,
I could never call you superficial. Besides, a picture’s worth a thousand words, especially that beautiful daydream-inducing painting of yours! The stuff of dreams.
pax,
dora
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Thank you so much Dora… I love the painting as well and the dreams of being there!
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I love this!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re very welcome 😊
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Wow, wow. Absolutely beautiful, Dwight!!
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Thank you so much Jeff! I am glad you liked it!
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You’re most welcome, Dwight! 😊
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I relate to that level of appreciation about which you write. I relate to that feeling of superficiality, too, but I try to avoid it. I slap myself upside the head when I catch myself being shallow, presenting only an appearance without substance or significance. In all honesty, I bet you do, too!
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Yes, I like both beauty and substance!! I like being in awe of things and then digging deeper! That is what your blog does for me!! :>)
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Thank you so much, {{{Dwight}}} ❤
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Wow!!! Purely lovely. Well penned and beautifully painted. A skillful complement of words to painting.
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Thank you so much!
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Your pictures and words are hardly superficial Dwight and a delight to the senses. Good lesson to all in choosing capturing pics an words when posting 💖
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Thank you Cindy! I do like the superficial, but I also like to dig deep at times! I am amazed at all the post that come through WP I can;t imagine how they can manage them all!
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Yes, ads can be annoying.. Love your painting, its beautiful 🙂
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I love the sun drenched water, I just want to dive in, enjoyed your lines too.
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I am glad you dived into both of them! Thanks Paul!
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You are an artist in the truest sense. I’d like to become like you! This is a brilliant poem. “Words escape me”- well, isn’t that pure passion?
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You are very kind! I really appreciate your kind affirmations. Pure passion is what poetry is all about. Anything less is just words! Thank you so much.
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Anything less is just words. How true! Have a great day! 🙏🤍🤍🤍
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You are welcome!
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