The old man lay on his death bed waiting for his last breath. Only his wife of sixty years remained with him in this lonely hour.
“We have had a great life together,” Catherine whispered to him as his eyes opened and then closed.
The old man half smiled and tried to nod his head.
“I will miss you my dear, but your time has come to cross over.”
Catherine’s mind wandered as she contemplated his passing…
“Crucial to finding the way is this: there is no beginning or end.”
“As your soul becomes one with the universe, the thought of beginnings and endings will be no more. The spirit of creation will carry you into the joy of your existence; beyond all that you could ask or think!”
His breathing became more shallow. She held his hand, as John drew his last breath.
Photo: Dwight L. Roth
Today at d’Verse, we are doing Prosery (flash fiction of exactly 144 words). Merril has chosen a line from Jo Harjo’s “A Map to the Next World.” The line must be included in our story.
The line is: “Crucial to finding the way is this: there is no beginning or end.”
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I enjoyed this piece of short fiction. I can picture the elderly couple in my mind.
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Thank you so much. I am glad it connected with you.
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What a beautiful write, Dwight. Bravo
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Thank you so much Beverly. I appreciate your comments.
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I remember those last moments vividly .. not the exact words, but oh, so very similar …
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Thank you Ivor. I am so sorry for your loss. Hope these memories were not too painful for you.
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No .. I always smile(with a joyful tear) about my treasured memories, and how beautifully vivid they are able to remain in my soul ..
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That is so good to hear!
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You did an excellent job with the prompt. Your story reminded me that one of the greatest gifts we can give a loved one is to be with them when they pass over, even though it hurts like hell.
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Yes you are so right about that! Thank you so much for your kind words. A lot of folks have had to lose a loved one this year with out being able to be there for them. Very sad indeed!
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You’re welcome, Dwight.
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I held my husband’s hand as he died. I wish I could have been with my mother when she died, in her sleep, I think. Engaging, thought-provoking story, Dwight. ❤ All the best!
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Thank you for sharing this Cheryl. I know it must have been very difficult! I appreciate your comment!
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Good job,Dwight!
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Thank you so much Valerie!
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Perfect way to use the prompt line, as one transitions to another place. it’s never the end 🙂
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Only the beginning! Thank you Lisa for your thoughts.
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You’re very welcome.
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Nice one Dwight passing onto our next big adventure must be a harsh but wondrous experience! It’s those left behind who suffer not knowing where they went …
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Hi Kate, I’ve missed seeing you on the blog. Thanks for your comment A traumatic experience for everyone involved.
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not if we are prepared Dwight … it’s a sure thing and we must all know it’s coming!
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Never prepared for a transition like this!
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then time to start, we aren’t getting any younger!
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Oh, you are right about that! :>)
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Dwight,
You’ve painted us such a tender and heart-breaking scene. The love between these two shines so powerfully. How we die is just as meaningful as how we live, especially for those we leave behind.
Pax,
Dora
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Thank you so much Dora! I agree… It is so important to be with them. I appreciate your comment!
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Nice story and the Beautiful nature 👌🌷
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Thank you very much!
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Most welcome 🙏
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What an amazing post!!
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Thank you so much for your kind comment!
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You blended the prompt so seamlessly that I would not have been able to pick it out without being told. Good job! Beautiful Prosery!
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Thank you so much for your kind comment, Jan. It was an interesting prompt!
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Heart touching story, Dwight! Great use of the prompt too.
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Thank you so much Jay! I hope you are doing well. So many this year have had to go through this without being able to be with their loved ones. Very sad indeed.
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I’ve been going through a rough patch, Dwight. Thanks for hoping so.
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You are welcome. Hang in there!
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I’ve had the honor to sit by the bedside of several beloved ones when they passed…last weeks, days, hours, moments of their lives…I find your story beautiful. It brings tears AND smiles. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. 🙂
(((HUGS)))
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You are welcome! It is a sobering thing to be there with them at this time. So very sad to lose a love one as many have done during this past year!
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Very sweet and well-written, Dwight ❤
-David
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Thank you so much David!
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Really quite profound
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Thank you very much Derrick! Contemplations on death can be that way!
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What a beautiful ending! The kind we all want, I think.
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Thank you Ingrid. Yes for sure!
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Beautiful piece, and excellent take on the prompt!
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Thank you Eugenia! It was an interesting challenge, especially in light of the past year.
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My pleasure, Dwight!
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A beautiful story. Permitting the release….letting the person know it’s okay to leave, affirming their transition….all is so important and you’ve captured it here beautifully with this gentle and loving couple. Excellent use of the line.
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Thank you so much Lillian! Hopefully we can all have a smooth transition.
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That’s a peaceful ending we could all wish for. (K)
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Yes, for sure! Thank you very much!
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So true, time will just be an abstract thought on the other side! 💖
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Only time will tell!
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Your prose left me with chills up and down my body ~~ the measure of an extraordinary write.
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Thank you Helen. I really am glad it connected with you.
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Love the wisdom in this flash, Dwight. That steam of love that never ends.
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Yes it is beautiful when it happens! Thank you so much!
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I think no matter what is that consciousness leaving the earth doesn’t necessarily means that it’s leaving the universe.
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Thank you Bjorn. I believe you are right.
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This is incredibly deep and poignant, Dwight! 💝💝
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Thank you Sanaa! I appreciate your kind comments.
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Oh I love this and such beautiful wisdom in this piece.
xo💖
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Thank you so much Cindy! I am glad you enjoyed it.
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You’re soooo welcome Dwight💖❣️
👏👏👏
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Beautiful piece 💜✨
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Thank you so much!
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🙂🙏🏻
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Your site would not let me comment on your posts!
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Oh, I thought I solved the problem of commenting from the reader. Never mind, you can open the site on google then there’d not be any problem ..I guess..
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Thank you!
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What a beautiful and comforting way to use the quote, Dwight.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed it!
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So tender and peaceful, Dwight. The end we would wish for–for ourselves and loved ones. Thank you!
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Thank you Merril… yes that is my wish as well!
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You’re welcome, Dwight. 💙
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I love the peaceful feel of this.
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Thank you Ken! I believe it is the way we all would like to go.
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A sensitive treatment of life and grief in one exchange, love how you say it.
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Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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My pleasure Dwight
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