Time smooths sharp edges
Mellows rigid perspectives
Time opens our blind eyes
Seeing others as equals
Colorblind // first step to peace
*
Time shakes us up
tumbling through our little
blip of eternal sinus rhythm,
spitting us out like grape seeds
to be replanted in another
place and time
*
Time sometimes just
swallows us whole
Painting “Splitting Space and Time”: Dwight L. Roth
Today at d’Verse, Laura asked us to look at the use of repetition in our poetry. Epiphora, from the Greek means ‘to turn about/upon’… and is used to drive in a point through poetic repetition. I am using the word time in my poem to show how we flow and change in time itself.
The painting is an abstract that I did a number of years ago. I thought it fit well with my theme!
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Repetition worked well! Love it. Wish I’d written it!
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Thank you Nan! I am so glad you enjoyed it and thank you for reposting it!
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An Inspired pairing of the painting and your thoughtful poem, Dwight! I see the theme of race relations appearing in many of your poems lately. I applaud you for those efforts. We live in violent times. All the best! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you so much Cheryl! It weighs heavily on my heart to hear all that is happening. With the media fueling the race card it will be a long time until change comes about!
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A powerful and relevant poem that addresses both the deeply personal and the broader universal. Bravo! 💓
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Thank you Michele! You have said it very well! I am glad you liked it!
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The painting really does make a great partner to this beautiful poem! It’s so great, Dwight!
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Thankyou so much! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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You’re welcome!
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A very insightful, poem, Dwight, and the painting is the perfect accompaniment!
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Thank you so much Liz!
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You’re welcome, Dwight!
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Clever.
2nd stanza brought on a giggle.
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Thank you Chrissy! It seemed like a good metaphor for me.
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That it is. 🙂
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I’ve learned to respect time, for all the reasons you mention. Never turn your back on it! 😉
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Oh, you are right about that! We learned a good lesson on that this past year!
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Yes!
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Time again caught us napping
This is no time for backslapping
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Time keeps on tickin’…
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Dwight, I love your ideas of time spitting us out like grape seeds and sometimes just swallowing us whole!
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Sometimes that is the way it feels in life! Hopefully it won’t be too soon! Thanks for your comment Lynn!
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You’re welcome!
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My day is now complete… My mother-in-law always told me, “Your day is not complete until you learn something new.” Epiphora… to turn about/upon. Yes, you used it so perfectly in your poem… adding depth to its meaning. Thank you! Good job, {{{Dwight}}} ❤
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Thank you Jan for your kind words! I enjoyed the challenge. We have some interesting prompts at d’Verse!
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Beautifully said. It’s very stirring!
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Thank you very much Lucy!
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I love that line “spitting us out like grape seeds” ❤
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Ha ha… I am glad you liked that one! Thank you!
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that last line carries so much weight and power. i do felt like spitted grape seeds, sometimes. you shared a perfect words-painting ensemble!
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
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Your painting and your poem ARE the perfect pairing!
And I feel, and understand, the thoughts and emotions you shared.
No matter where we are spit/planted ( 🙂 )we must continue to live, and promote, unity, peace, equality, love, etc. And when we are swallowed whole, let’s be so loud and active we get spit-up (HA) so we can continue to do good. 😉
(((HUGS)))
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Ha ha… I love your comment. Just like Jonah! Thank you for your great comment and kind words!
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Yes! Exactly! 😀
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Time a perfect metaphor for repetition – like the clock, the metronome – for strict epiphora you could slip time to the end lines
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Thanks Lara! I am still trying to figure all this poetics out!
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me too – I tend to resist poetry forms but am now finding the restrictiveness helps the creativity rather than stifles it
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It is a natural editor!
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spot on!
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A very effective poem on time, which is a great word to repeat, Dwight.
I really like your painting, and it pairs perfectly with the poem.
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Thank you Merril! I appreciate your kind comments.
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You’re very welcome, Dwight!
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Oh yes, time does all of these things! And the painting is perfect 🙂
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your comment!
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Beautiful painting, Dwight, and a perfect pairing with you lovely piece.
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Thank you so much!
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Most welcome, Dwight!
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Dwight, you are a master of arts. Keep these great posts coming.
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Thank you Linda! I appreciate you commenting on my post!
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… a poem that resonates … deeply.
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Thank you Helen!
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Dwight,
A good lesson to heed to never underestimate time’s ability to “swallow us whole.” Penetrating words.
~🕊Dora
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Yes, we say that all too real this past year! Thanky ou!
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Made me think of Gollum’s riddle in Bilbo:
“Gollum: This thing all things devours: birds, beasts, trees, flowers; gnaws iron, bites steel; grinds hard stones to meal; slays king, ruins town, and beats high mountain down.”
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That is time for sure! Thanks!
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Loved your poetry on time and this line was great
“Time sometimes just
swallows us whole”
Relatable Dwight❣️
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Especially as we get older! And sometimes it seems to just leave us behind!
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It’s so true💖🌷🙏
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Nice
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Time 🕰✨❤️
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There are great truths here. Nicely done.
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I am glad it connected with you. Thank you so much!
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Time gives the opportunity
to enrich the soul
with blessings aplenty
The chance to make it whole
if you’re wise … and lucky 😎
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It does seem to take wisdom and a little luck! Great response David. Soul enrichment … the best part of life! Thanks.
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