Stretching over the sink he shaves
Just like his dad / Barbasol and all.
Standing on tiptoes he pats on
a face full of shaving cream.
His plastic pretend razor slides easily
making wide snowplow tracks.
Rinsing off the excess he continues
until his face is shiny clean.
Wiping his face with the towel
he smiles feeling like a real man.
Little brother watches carefully
and copies the same motions;
rinsing his razor in the same sink.
Photo: Dwight L. Roth
Today at d/Verse, Grace asked us to consider the significance of setting in our poems. We are to write a poem that definitely gives the reader a sense of the poem’s setting. This is one of my favorite photos of my two boys many years ago. I found a child’s shaving kit at the Dollar Store and he loved it.
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I love the photo and the poem! (And weren’t you a great dad!)
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I tried! Moments like this really payed off! He had so much fun and still remembers that moment!
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🙂
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What a lovely gift you gave him…. And the gift he gave back with the sweetness of the photo and the cherished memory… We don’t always realize at the time how precious a moment is. Your post made me smile with memories of some of my own sweet moments. Thank you.
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It was a wonderful moment in time for sure! Thank you so much. I am glad it connected with you!
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This made me smile, it’s a moment captured by the memory and the photo. Charming.
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Thank you so much! It makes me smile every time I look at it!
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You’re welcome 😊
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Beautiful photo and words.
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Thank you very much!
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My pleasure 🙂
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Beautiful innocent photo
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Thank you so much!
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How utterly delightful …. I have memories of my three boys doing just as you describe, so beautifully. Cheers.
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They were so cute back then! a wonderful moment in time to be remembered!
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Good memories are evergreen.
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yes!!
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Of course Roth. Happy lunar year from Vietnam. Today is Vietnamese people new year. The year of the Buffalo.
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Happy New Year Henry! Do you have some big celebrations going on as a result??
Dwight
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Of course. It’s such a big moment here. So much eating, drinking and fun. A time for family reunion and wishing good luck, success and good health to everyone.
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How very nice! I hope you have a great day with family and friends!
Dwight
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I do Roth. It’s always a wonderful moments for me here.
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Great!
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Such a lovely photo and poem. Memories are the gateway to the past and the picture is a living proof of that.
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Thank you very much. You are exactly right. Great memories are never forgotten!
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Welcome and I definitely agree!
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Lovely photos and poem ❤️❤️❤️😍😍
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Thank you very much!
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You’re always welcome
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Such a fun photo and poem, Dwight, Delightful! You capture the setting quite accurately. ❤
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Thank you Cheryl! This one was a very easy one to portray. The action just flows on and on.
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Ah, a place all boys have been and captured so well.
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Yes, I agree! I remember getting my fathers double edge razor and pretending to shave when I was young!
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Lovely photo🥰 so innocent. A beautiful poem Sir.
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Thank you! They had so much fun with this!
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Most welcome. It is the beauty of childhood😇
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Yes!!
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Aww, that’s so beautiful and you captured the moment as such. So heartwarming!
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It is one of my all time great memories!
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Such a sweet and affectionate poetry 💗💞
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Thank you! They were very sweet little boys!
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What a delightful poem capturing the sweetness of your boys Dwight!
❤️💖
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Thanks Cindy, they really were cute!
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You’re sooo welcome!! 💖 sooo cute!
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Dwight, this is just adorable and so loving. The young bud of a man doing his best to be like his Dad. So much love between them. Memories to treasure.
I used to watch my father shaving at weekends and wait for the end when he slapped aftershave on his face and came after me to give me a hug. Smelling of aftershave. ❤️.
Memories are treasures.
Miriam
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Thank you Miriam. I love the memories you share of your father as well. I am sure that smell always reminds you of him. Such great memories we have!
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Wonderful photo and such an evocative poem
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Thank you Derrick. They were such cute little guys!
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I am way too high Dwight, right! — come on over and fly with me! I will be back earthbound tomorrow to tread.better,!
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Thanks Rob. I will be there!! :>)
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I have returned as threatened — Poetry is the statement of power that sets the soul free, to ibe, exactly who you are — and in being just that, to introduce your truth to the world!..
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Very well said, Rob. It does just that!!
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Such a beautiful photo and poem! So pleased you have managed to preserve this memory of your children’s childhood.
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Thank you Ingrid! !t was so cute at the time I could not let it go without a photo!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Nicely recounted, Dwight. Even though I still trim around its edges, I’ve been fully hairy-faced for (slightly more than) the past half-century, but I can still recall the act, can even still recall watching my (now long-dead) father shave. He always sang “‘oh, Susannah” while he did it; don’t ask me why.
Nice work, Brother.
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Thanks Ron! I tried grown a mustache one time but it got so bristly I shaved it off! I like a clean face for myself. Love your story. Your father must have been a happy man!
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I love this poem and this story.
My dad’s cousin (female) has a story like this about watching her dad shave when she was a young girl. There is some mesmerizing about it, in a way. She then asked when she would get to shave. My grandfather, flustered and unable to think of how to answer, told her to eat her vegetables
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Ha Ha! how funny, the silly things we say in the spur of the moment! Shaving does have a sort of hypnotic affect when watching it. Thank you for your comment and for sharing this interesting moment with us!
dwight
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The manliest of rites! You captured the magic in that Barbasol can.
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Thank you Brendon! They had a great time with the cream!! :>)
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Awwww, this is precious, Dwight! I can still remember the smell of Barbasol, although I haven’t seen a can in decades. I have nominated you for the Outstanding Blogger Award. (http://microofthemacro.com/2021/02/12/outstanding-blogger-award/). If you don’t wish to or simply cannot participate, no worries at all. Just showing my appreciation for you and your amazing blog! 🌞
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Thank you so much for your kind consideration!
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You are most welcome! 🌞
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Oh those childhood memories are so precious. You have showed us how delightful and memorable they are in your fabulous poem Dwight. I remember dressing up in my mothers clothes and high heeled shoes. It was the best! 🙂
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Role playing as a child was so much fun! I am glad you enjoyed this one.
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Oh what a poem of tender humor, and the yearning of youth for adulthood! I love this metaphor, Dwight: “wide snowplow tracks” Perfect.
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Thank you Dora! That seemed like a great comparison, especially as the cream piles up on the shaver!
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OMG, so many wonderful comments. I don’t recognize more than half of these folks. You must belong to more than one poetry group. I actually started shaving when I was 13; never passed a clean shave inspection in boot camp.
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Thanks Glenn! This one seemed to be a hit! No I only belong to d’Verse! I think they were just trying to be intimidating!
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you perfectly captured how children emulate their parents … and want to grow up far too quickly 🙂
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Seems most of what we learn in life is from others. They has a really good time! Thanks Kate!
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cheers Dwight!
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What a priceless photo! I remember watching both my dad and my grandpa shave. Back then Old Spice was what used for aftershave. Your photo brought back those happy memories 🙂
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Thank you Lisa! I am glad it brought back come good memories. yes Old Spice in a mug with a brush to work up the soap/cream! And a double edged razor! Wilkinson Sword blades!
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🙂 YW
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Precious memories. So glad you are recording these kinds of unforgettable moments! ❤
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It is a one of a kind!
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You paint the perfect picture, Dwight.
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Thanks Ken! It was an easy memory to paint. The words just came naturally!
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This is so delightful and one of those memories to treasure for a long time. Great photo too!
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Thank you Grace! It is one of my favorite memories!
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Thank you for reposting this one!
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Sweet photo! Beautiful memory-filled poem! Great gift from dad to son! 🙂
Even tho’ I was a girl, I was fascinated to watch my daddy shave. He used a ceramic mug that had a wonderful smelling cake of soap in it…Old Spice…and he’d let me put in some water and swish the brush around and make the thick suds/shaving cream for his face. 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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Such a good memory for you! I love it! I remember the mug and the brush my father used. I still have it sitting on a shelf!
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My father always used a shaving machine… and I would have loved to have a toy machine…
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Interesting. I don’t believe I ever saw a toy electric razor!. That would have been fun especailly if it would have had a motor in it!
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Great picture and poem. I loved the line about snow blow tracks.
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Thank you Molly. It looked just like that when they started!
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