Black Turtle peninsulaed on mud
Solared in the sunshine he bathes
Blood veins freely through his labyrinth
Nerving throughout shelled synapses
Tingles summered in brained memory
Reminding him of algaed Myrtle
Logged down the way mirrored and smooth
Waiting for him to get unshelled
Today at d’Verse, Bjorn asked us to rethink our use of verbs. He wanted us to choose some nouns to turn into verbs and then write our poem around them. I saw this big old turtle a few weeks back at the local park. He seemed to be a good subject. Hope you enjoy untangling my noun/verbs. I think I got a few noun/adjectives as well.
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Cool poem! I love a turtle!
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Thank you very much! He was a big one!!
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Great photos. Inventive use of nouns as verbs! Hope all is well! Cheryl
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Thank you Cheryl! Yes doing very well! Thank you!
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Your first line set the tone for your turtleizing tribute. That is a good-sized turtle! I wish the him/her a long life doing what he/she loves to do.
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HaHa/ Probably sunning mostly! Thanks Lisa!
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You’re welcome, Dwight.
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Good capture of the turtle, Dwight. Lovely poem.
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Thank you Miriam. He was sunning just below the bridge I was on!
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You fared well with this prompt, rocking it gently. I’ve never seen turtles in the wild. It appears it would be a non-active sighting.
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I certainly enjoyed this piece. Turtle are so neat. Your poem does the creature justice in its beauty alone in nature. Captivating poem, and great use of the prompt. I enjoyed your take on verbing!
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Thank you Lucy! It was an interesting challenge! The turtle gave me something to work with… !
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A cute and clever turtle
Wades and waddles under the Myrtle
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HaHa! thanks Ivor or maybe above… :o)
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Clever take on the prompt! (I think the end was a turtle version of risque?)
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Ha ha… a little slow in coming together!! :>)
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😀
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This was a wonderful ode to turtles, Dwight. I agree with Liz…
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Thank you so much!
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great verb nouns in your turtle tribute Dwight, most enjoyable!
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Thank you Kate!
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What a great turtle portrait!
And what a creative turtle poem! Wow on your verb/nouns!
I turtle-y shell-ebrate this post!
HUGS!!!
🐢 🐢 🐢
PS…unshelled, eh!
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Ha ha ha!! This made me smile. Thank you for your humorous affirmation.
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Very good indeed. Excellently versed and lyrically evoked. Great photos too
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words.
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You’re very welcome
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That is wonderfully involving Dwight, has a pastoral edge to it — well done.
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Thank you very much Rob! I appreciate your affirming words.
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I loved the shelled synapses and algaed Myrtle! Clever and fun poem. Bravo
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Thank you Beverly! He was a cute turtle!
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I find turtes amazing… and I know people who turtle too.
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Yes, I get behind some of them when I drive!! LOL
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Awww, I love turtles! Great take on verb/nouns.
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Thank.you… he is rather cute!
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You’re welcome!
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My favorite verbification here is “peninsulaed.”
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Thank you! I figured no one else would have that one!
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Well done.
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Thank you Ken!
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Very creative and I enjoyed the pogression of his journey!
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Thank you Grace! This was a different kind of write for me!
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Turtling!! I love it. Turtling is the best!
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Thank you so much!
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