Bunky died today!
He called me just last week from his Shack on the mountain. Seems, his wife sold the house, left, and had gone to Florida. For him, the Shack was his place to get away from the heat of the summer. She stayed home by herself. Her daughter came up and helped. They liquidated all in just a few weeks.
When I worked for him, we always enjoyed long conversations filled with stories of growing up in Eastern North Carolina. He was strong willed, opinionated, and had done just about everything in his seventy plus years. Now, my friend was calling for a listening ear.
Sadly he shared, “When it was over said and done, it was a time, and there never was enough of it.”
Bunky had slipped on the side of the mountain and hit his head on a rock!
Today at d’Verse, we are writing Prosery. This consists of writing a short story, flash fiction or true, exactly 144 words, and incorperating a line of poetry given to us by Lillian. The poetry line is taken from a poem by, “A Time” by Allison Adelle Hedge Coke.
The lines we were given were:
“When it was over said and done
it was a time
and there never was enough of it.”
The story above is a true story from a few years ago, when my good friend died suddenly in an accident at his place in the mountains.
Join us at: https://dversepoets.com
Friendship lost but not forgotten ❤
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Yes, he was a great friend!
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Oh my goodness. Dwight, I’m so sorry for your loss.
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Thank you Lucy! I appreciate your kind words.
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Its always sad to loss a loved one…and remembering them, is as sad as losing them
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Sorry Dwight.Good friends are hard to find, even harder to lose! RIP Bunky…
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Thank you so much Rob for your kind words! yes, you are right. Irreplaceable!
dwight
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I’m so sorry to hear about the death of your friend. It’s always a shock to lose someone we’re close to.
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Yes it is, especially if is sudden! Thank you Liz!
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A glorious tribute Dwight…. memories live on….
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Yes and many good ones there were. Thank you Ivor!
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Dwight, I am sorry you lost someone dear to you. Take care. Cheryl
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Thank you Cheryl. I appreciate your kind words.
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I’m so sorry for your loss, Dwight. This was a lovely tribute.
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Thank you Merril. This happened a few years ago, but the memories are still fresh in my mind!
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I can imagine they would be.
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I just realized that I left the a out of my quote. I went back and corrected it and changed a word in the story as well.
Dwght
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So funny, Dwight. Someone pointed out that I also left a word out, and I corrected mine, too. Great minds. 😏
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:>)
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How sad Dwight! I am sorry for your loss but what a lovely way to honor his memory by sharing his story. ☺️
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Thank you Christine. It is good to be able to share this with you all. He was a very good friend.
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I can tell from your writing ☺️
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Dear Dwight,
How beautiful to resurrect this beautiful story with such a special man that is tucked in your heart.
Thank you for sharing it with us. ❤️🙏
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It was good for me to be able to write this. It was great to revisit our friendship again!
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I’m so glad and thanks for the invite to the poetry site
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You are welcome. Glad to be connecting with you.
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Your story is a wonderful tribute to a friend and a friendship Dwight. Losing a friend is sad, having had a friend is a bliss.
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Thank you Peter. You are right, it is a great loss with many good memories. He was my boss at one time, but always treated me as an equal! Very rare to find that kind of friendship.
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Well done here, Dwight, in fitting the prompt into a personal experience while writing a fine tribute to your friend.
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Thanks Ken. It just seemed to work out very well for me to do that.
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How sad. Memories will be there always.
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Thank you . Yes they will.
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This is a lovely tribute to a friend. It is also a reminder of how quickly things change.
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Thank you Truedessa. One day at a time is all any of us have… make the best of it!
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kaykuala
It is tragic and sudden that often leave lots of good memories in friendship. Great storyline Dwight!
Hank
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Thank you Hank!
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His memories will always be with you and am so sorry for your loss.
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words.! Good memories do stay!
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A great tribute to a friend . But don’t worry Dwight his memories will live long enough ❣️❣️❣️
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Yes he had many friends who loved him!
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By your words I can understand that he is a great person with a kind heart 💓
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Yes!
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❣️❣️❣️🙂🙂❣️❣️❣️
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Good job, Dwight! You wove that line in so well, I had to read the instructions before I could tell which one was the prompt!
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Thank you Jan, I appreciate your kind affirmation of my work.
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I just appreciate your work! ❤
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You are one of my biggest fans, Jan! Thank you.
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A moving, evocative piece of writing. I am sorry for the loss of your friend.
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Thank you very much for your kind words, Ingrid.
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The prompt line has evoked so many expressions of friendship, love and loss, and Bunky lost his home and his life. Such a sad story, Dwight.
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It was vey sad to hear what happened when he called. It was very difficult for him that it happened the way it did.
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That is a shack???? He had a lovely place to live his last in. Dying in the place you love best is a blessing denied most people.
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Yes it was a run down house when he bought it. He owned a siding business so he had his workers fix it up and reside it with vinyl. The house had no running water at the time. He spent years fixing it up and getting it to this point! Yes, he really loved the place and enjoyed being there. Thank you Jane!
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It looks splendid!
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It was a very comfortable place to live.
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It looks it 🙂
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I’m so sorry for your loss, Dwight! 😦
But your tribute to Bunky is beautiful! 🙂
He lives on in the lives of everyone who knew him and in your writing.
Oh, his smile just lit up my night! 🙂
(((HUGS)))
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He always had a hardy laugh and a sense of humor that people loved! Thank you for your kind comments.
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Nicely told. I have a few late friends, too
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Seems this happens more with age! :>)
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Indeed – especially if one’s friends are older.
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Yes!
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very nicely written, Dwight. You’ve honored his memory beautifully. May he rest in peace.
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Thank you Jay for your kind words!
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You’re welcome.
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I am so sorry for your loss 😦
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Thank you for your kind words!
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What a lovely way to commemorate your friend.
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Thank you so much! He was a great friend!
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What a heartwarming tribute! ❤
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Thank you Kym!
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My pleasure as always Dwight! 🙂
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A hard ending, and a heartfelt tribute. (K)
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Thank you!
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Bunky sounds like he was quite a guy …. both of you blessed to call each other ‘friend.’
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Thank you. Yes, he was a most interesting person.
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A lovely tribute to a friendship cut short. So sorry for your loss; even though it was a few years ago, it stays with you, doesn’t it?
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Yes, good memories last a lifetime.
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That they do.
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Wonderful tribute Dwight.
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Thank you so much Linda!
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Sometimes it doesn’t fit with me that these heart losses should be used for our poems later. But perhaps it softens the loss somehow. So sorry for Bunky!
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Thank you Mary for your comment. I think I understand where you are coming from on this. It did help for me to put it in words.
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Oh,so much sad feelings and experience for your true friend.lost the true friend is biggest event of the life.
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It is difficult to lose a close friend. The sadness is always there and comes back to visit from time to time!
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Yeah.it is terribly situation for a person who has lost some one special but memories live always with that person.
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Yes!
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Welcome,dear !!with my heartily consolation.
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So much sadness… but at least he died in a place where he really wanted to be.
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Yes, he loved the little mountain house.
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A lovely tribute ❤
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Thank you so much!
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So sorry for the loss of your friend, Dwight. I bet he would have enjoyed being remembered in this way though! 🙂
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Thank you Susi! Yes, I believe he would have…
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🙂
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You did this very well. Nice to read it. Glad you added the explanation.
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Thank you. I appreciate your comment.
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