If I should find this my last day
Looking back on my work and play
Life is the place where joy and sorrow meet
A roller coaster ride of ups and downs.
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Struggles, pain, and joys abound
Making me stronger // standing my ground;
Becoming the man who bears my name.
The image of my creator reflected in my face;
Not perfect // but full of love and amazing grace…
A shadow of the divine embracing a much better place.
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Life goes on be it here or there…
In our children // in their children
His face is everywhere;
Reflections of love immeasurable power…
Strength for today and hope for each hour
Passing on down through the thread of life
So fragile // so dear // so full of strife
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If this were to be my last day,
With sorrow’s leaving I would surely say,
“I’m not gone I’m here to stay!”
Photo: Dwight L. Roth
Today at d’Verse, we were asked to write a poem written with the first person “I am” included in it. This is a poem about ourselves. This poem looks a life from my aging perspective, realizing that even though I may pass on, my life goes on. We are created in the image of our creator and that is in our DNA. It gets passed on from me to my children and grandchildren. So in that perspective life goes on.
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Well said, Dwight!
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Thanks Liz! Writing first person is an interesting perspective in poetry.
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Yes, it’s fun to write from different personas, including one’s own.
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:>)
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Such a beautiful poem!!
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Yes, Dwight, you will live on through your children, through the life you have lived, in the beauty you have created in your poems, in the flowers you planted. If I knew you well, I feel certain the list would be very long. Beautiful poem. Take care. Cheryl
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Thank you for your beautiful affirming response. It is good to know that a little of what I am will pass on especially through my grandchildren. They are such a joy to watch.
Thank you for your kind words, Cheryl.
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Thank you very much Mary!
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Amen Dwight.
Reflecting our creator is why we are here. It is not an easy road we have been called to. If it was, everyone would do it.
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Thank you Brian! That is why we can have self-confidence in who we are as a person.
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Beautiful poem !
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Indeed.
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Thank you Lisa!
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You are very welcome.
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Reassuring… spoken in faith. Comforting … spoken with trust.
Future-Filled… spoken with grace.
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Thank you Jan! We are truly blessed with family and friends.
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Beautifully put! 🙂
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Thank you very much!
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You’re welcome 😉
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Yes, it is good to know we will live on in the hearts and minds of our family. Beautifully written.
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Thank you Sherry!
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love the rhythm of this and it is deeply reflective, profound!
Just like you 🙂
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Thank you Kate. This is another of my favorite poems that I thought fit the prompt but even more fit the times we are in. I appreciate your kind words.
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♥️♥️♥️♥️
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Thank you!
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Very well said and beautifully penned ♥️🌺.
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
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♥️🙏😇
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Beautiful thoughts
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Thank you Derrick!
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kaykuala
A shadow of the divine embracing
a much better place.
A great fight-back Dwight! One is always aware there is something worth having out there. It is a matter of being blessed to readily enjoy them.
Hank
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Yes, some live only for what they believe is coming and miss the blessing so life today! Thank you Hank!
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When my father was dying he said much the same thing–“no regrets”. That is a life well lived. (K)
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It is satisfying to see and have this feeling as we grow older!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you so much for the reblog!
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Always happy to share your posts, Dwight!!
Chuck
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What an inspiring and enjoyable tead. It minded me ofone of my favorite quotes by Shirley Abbott:
“We all grow up with the weight of history on us. Our ancestors dwell in the attics of our brains as they do in the spiraling chains of knowledge hidden in every cell of our bodies”.
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Thank you Beverly and the quote is exactly what I was talking about! Very nice!
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I love this so much!
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Thank you very much! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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💜
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena.
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Dwight that was just beautiful. Words to live by 🙂
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Thanks Christine! It helps keep things in perspective!
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I love that final concluding line. I believe that if we have lived our lives well, it will be reflected in our children and grandchildren lives. Thanks for joining in. Have a good weekend.
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Thank you Grace. I agree, children and grandchileren carry on our legacy along with their own!
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Love your poem❤️ In light of current events it made me tearful. I guess none of us know when that day will come. We can just be grateful for this day😊
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Yes, we should live every day as if there were not tomorrow!
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Thank you so much! It does seem to have more meaning these unsettling days!
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Beautiful words. I love the perspective of life going on.
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Thank you so much Astrid!
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kaykuala
It is good that we stamp our authority come what may. Life is forever fraught with choices1
Hank
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Yes, and those choices influence how our legacy lives on.
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Becoming the man who bears my name, very nice. So many wonderful thoughts in this sweet earnest eulogy to what we know will be and what was. the faith is inspiring
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Thank you Lona! I can see why it connects with you. I am glad you found it inspiring!
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Your poem speaks of contentment and joy borne of a life well lived.
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How kind of you to say that! I guess that sums it up pretty well!
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Lively words 👍👍love all your blogs . Looking forward for your blogs !! ☺️
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
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