Life is full of twists
and turns // suddenly blowing
changing everything;
Full of dragon’s breath fury
Destroying all in its path.
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Photo of my tree today: Dwight L. Roth
A follow up of the five-line Japanese poetry given to us yesterday on d’Verse Poets Pub. The form I am trying to do here is Kyoka! Today I lost the top half of my maple tree, so I could laugh or cry … or write a poem about it!! Inspiration can be found in all of life!
Kyoka is to the senryu what tanka is to the haiku. That is, Kyoka is a five-line form of parody poetry. While tanka savors the nature/human nature intersection with heart and pathos, kyoka explores just human nature, usually in as satirical a way as possible. Or, at the very least, in a self-deprecating way.
Sorry for the loss of your tree.
Is say the same thing about inspiration. Except I say everywhere is a picture.
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Thanks Ray! I saw you guys got some heavy flooding last week as well! I say to be a poet you must live on the edge of inspiration!
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Thanks, the flooding was mostly on the northshore. We had some glorious thunder and lightning. At 3am I wasn’t our and about.
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Glad to know you are safe!
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It pains me to see a tree damaged like that. I don’t think I’ve heard of Kyoka. So many new poetic forms to learn!
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It pains me too. Yesterday was the first I heard of it. I thought they were all jus Tankas. Thanks!
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Sorry ‘bout losing that tree … dragons will do that!
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Thanks Jan! The spring storms get pretty strong around here.
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Oh dear. It looks like there was a hollow in the center of the limb that may have weakened it. It looks like it’s been around a long time. May it heal from the injury and continue on.
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It is only ten years old. I believe it had some injury earlier but did not break. Hopefully I can save the other half. It is pretty thing around the break. Thanks for your concern!
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Dwight that tree is only 10 years old??? Things must grow a lot faster where you’re at. It would take 50 years (or more) for a maple to get that big here. What will you do with the broken limb?
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We have a nice long growing season. Maples grow pretty fast! I will saw it up and put it back in the woods.
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It looks bigger than it really is… probably five or six inch diameter at the biggest end of the broken limb.
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Love the photo AND the poem (like always).
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Thank you Tara! I appreciate your visits to my blog!
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I very much enjoy it. Thanks for sharing with us!
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You are welcome!
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This is an interesting form of poetry, I may try it! Thank you
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I’ve never heard of Kyoka before, the poem reflects the situation well. We’ve some wind here on the Scottish coast, blown over the Atlantic.
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This was new to me as well. I am finding a lot of interesting poetry forms at our d’Verse group!
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Yolanda blew over Cebu
November 2013
Thousands souls washed out to sea
Never seen again
Thankful to be here now knowing you
Thanks for this posting, you’ve struck nerve spark, long gone in many yesteryears.
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Update: followed up on the inspiration and content of this posting
you did it
now you have me awakened to this word art form
typhoons, floods,
natures anger stirred striking without prejudice
I’ve made my History start at: https://dversepoets.com/ with this posting: https://wp.me/P2VBZ8-3hY
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Wonderful! I saw your poem on d’Verse, but it did not see anywhere to leave a comment. Welcome to d’Verse! It is a great group of folks.
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I love the thought behind your poem. Life is short and not to be taken for granted!
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I have never read kyoka ! For the first time i read it and loved it ! so well written
Do read my blog too. Your reviews are valuable ❤
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Thank you!
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