It does make us rethink life when death is knocking
making us withdraw into our cocoons
Time to rethink our way of life // our values // our purpose
while we quarantine in our homes
Forced reflection demanded when death offers its portal
Looking out on quiet streets
Neighbors now masked strangers
Some live in fear // most take precautions
Others choose denial // finding reality hard to face
We now live in a time warp somewhere out in space
Getting prepared to make entrance
into a strange new world
Uncertain what walking through this portal may reveal
We step out cautiously and do as we’re told
Life is precious // some will die // most will live
We just hope and pray death’s portal
is not our chamber door
Staircase Painting: Dwight L. Roth
Today at d’Verse, Anmol asked to consider the word portal for our prompt today! As we move into a new way of living with the dangers that are all around us, I chose to write about how it affects us mentally as well as physically.
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I’ve been at death’s door a few times
And the eyes have opened again
To reveal life’s sunshine and rain
Beyond every closed door
There’s an original world
Turn the latch and find more
Give realities of life a whirl
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Very Good Ivor! You should join us at d’verse this evening!
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Maybe one day Dwight…..
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:>)
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Beautiful Dwight
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Thank you so much Tara!
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Your painting and your poem speak for what so many of us are feeling.
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Thank you Liz… It is a different world now!
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Our uncertain future after lockdown. Well said, Dwight.
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Yes, Thank you Rosaliene! It will be different!
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It is a strange world with everyone wearing mask and gloves. Let’s hope that our door is not marked for death, but for life. Be safe and well.
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Thank you Grace! Yes Keep your door shut and be safe!
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I am so grateful that portal does not seem to be in our neighborhood right now.
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You seem to be in a great place geographically. Keep your chamber door shut! Don’t heed the knock knock knockking!
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Your painting is the perfect complement to your poem 💙
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Thank you Donna! I really appreciate your comment. I did this one three or four years ago!
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Let the bitch knock away. Ignore the plague whore. Put on earphones and listen to Mozart or Billy Joel or Bruce Springsteen.
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Keep focused and creative! A great way to stay healthy! Keep the door shut and take an inside look!
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kaykuala
A frightful realization! .To think that no one can escape if careless or adamant. One has to conform to the new normal. Unlike a prison sentence, we are nowhere nearer to knowing when is the end! Very true Dwight!
Hank
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Thank you Hank! It has really changed our perception of the world around us.
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It’s indeed a strange feeling of vulnerability and also randomness. We are also not just protecting ourselves but others. It’s hard to switch to that perspective sometimes. (K)
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Yes the changes this past two months have been a real paradigm shift!
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These lines jump out at me:
“Looking out on quiet streets
Neighbors now masked strangers”
Isolation seems like the worst fate of all at times.
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I think Hell is total isolation! Very difficult to see all this happening around us. It is so good to see things opening back up again.
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It certainly seems like a time warp and we are at this portal which could lead us anywhere. A thoughtful piece on what it means for us. Well penned! 🙂
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Thank you so much for your comment!
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“Uncertain what walking through this portal may reveal” I hope things change for the better for all of us 🙂 The painting and poem both are very beautiful Dwight! True Art.
Jay
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Thank you so much Jay! I think your generation will change the world for the better! Having seen what is really important in life you will have a new perspective beyond, what can I get for myself attitude!
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The pleasure is mine and Thankyou for the inspiration!
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Your poem conveys the new dangers and way of living so swell, Dwight. Thankfully, in the UK there is a lot of work being done to help people who are suffering from the mental effects of the lockdown. Many of these people were already socially isolated and the pandemic has exacerbated conditions that already existed. These lines spoke to me:
‘Forced reflection demanded when death offers its portal
Looking out on quiet streets
Neighbors now masked strangers’
and
‘We now live in a time warp somewhere out in space
Getting prepared to make entrance
into a strange new world’.
I’m feeling a bit tearful now, so I’m taking Glenn’s advice – loud music and then some more creativity!
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Thank you so much Kim for your thoughtful response! Recovering from this for some will be like soldiers returning from war! PTSD will add to the already underfunded Mental Health system. Stay hopeful, things will get better!
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Strong poetry 👍
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Thanks for sharing such a masterly penned poem that truly reflects today’s new world; and, supported by a great image. Best Regards. Stay Safe. Stay Smiling.
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Thank you for your kind words of encouragement! I appreciate your comment and you stay safe as well! :>)
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Nice line: “Forced reflection demanded when death offers its portal” This time gives us a chance to examine our views on death.
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Yes, time to reflect!
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“Life is precious.”
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Yes it is and more so as we get older!
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“We step out cautiously and do what we’re told” Even that leaves much questioning and consideration and risk. Of all portals, death is the one we cannot avoid.
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Yes, I believe that is why it stops us in our tracks!
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Good one, Dwight! Such a lovely staircase…I’m hopeful death’s portal leads somewhere even better 🙂
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Yes, hopefully up rather than down! LOL I appreciate your comment!
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You summed up things so well with this poem ❤ Especially loved the part about being in a portal waiting to see how we come out on the other side. Very well done!
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Thank you very much! I found the prompt of portal fit in very well with a poem I had written that morning. With a few edits it worked! I appreciate your kind comments!
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Very apt reflection of our current situation–including your final lines about death and our own chamber door.
I like your painting, too. That staircase makes us wonder where it leads, and what portal lies just out of sight.
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Thank you Merril. This is one of my favorite painting. It does have an air of mystery about it!
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I believe
we have always lived in that time warp somewhere out in space.
So incisive.
All this was the case
all ways.
very incisive
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You are very sharp to catch this. We are a dot in the Milkyway and have always been.
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Death becomes a reality, families experiencing stunning grief in great number. Certainly a time for reassessing our values.
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Thank you! A great loss of life indeed with this nasty virus!
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Aye, i love the thought behind this piece. 😉😉😉 You’re in insightful and inspiring person. 😃
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Thank you so much! I found your story quiet an interesting journey you are on! If the cosmos is with in all of us… is it really out there as well??
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I believe it’s the same both on the inside and
the outside. 😉😃
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I wonder what the balance will be…. we need to find a balance that will work over a few years I fear… this virus will not dissapear
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In time we will all come in contact with it. Only time will tell!
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>>We just hope and pray death’s portal
is not our chamber door>>
GREAT lines!
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Yes that is for sure!
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True that
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Thanks for reading and commenting!
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