There’s a Poetry Garden of Forbidden Fruit
Where words, when planted grow and bear fruit
Some words, like the Trail of Tears, wreak havoc
Others have hidden or not so hidden connotations.
Lazy Housewife, The Czar, and Black Beauty leave one
wondering what is really being implied when applied.
Beware of the Dazzling Blue peppers like Blue Fire
They may sound sweet as a Princess, but when spoken
come out like dragon’s breath // making one feel singed.
Beware of the words of the Wizard // fruit tasting delectable
but leaving a bad after taste // cutting like a Purple Sword.
Make your words like lovely Aurora, Tender and True
with a touch of Reine des Glaces.
Stay out of the Garden of Forbidden Fruit.
Photo: Dwight L. Roth
Sarah at d’Verse introduced us to the idea of a garden of poetry. She gave us a list of heirloom garden seeds to pick from and plant some poetry seeds into a poem. The list of words are all real seed names and are highlighted in black in the poem above.
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Good advice for our use of words: “Make your words like lovely Aurora, Tender and True”
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Thanks Frank!
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Some words are definitely more appetizing than others. I like your spin on them in this poem.
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Thanks Lisa. I had to stir up my imagination on this one.
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You cooked up a good one 🙂
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Nice
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Thank you!
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Ah, Dwight, you planted me a whole garden! You’ve used the words so well, creating a real sense of wonder and mystery, a real sense that there’s a whole story behind each one.
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Thanks Sarah. I had no clue what each one represented so I went into the imaginary world to write!
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Wow! a wonderful poem and expalins it all!!
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Thank you so much~ What we say does matter!
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You know, all these vegetable and flower names are really ones to sit down to and wonder whoever and why such names
Much💙love
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That is for sure!
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What a lovely response to a clever set of prompts!
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Thank you Jan! Have you ever heard of any of these heirloom seeds?
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They were new to me. Very interesting. But Bob, whose mom was an avid gardener in central CA planted several of them as a bob remembers.
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Interesting!
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You’ve created a special garden with your words Dwight!
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Thank you Linda! I appreciate your kind words!
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I love those strong chilies … a garden of many tastes
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Perhaps a tasteless garden of taste!?
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Hot and spicy!!
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Well, after reading this I want to try a few of these garden wonders.
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Ha Ha! Who are you going to use them on!!
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kaykuala
Give it a pass for the garden of forbidden fruits might have a repeat of getting people out of Paradise.
Great imagination, Dwight!
Hank
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Thanks Hank! That sort of crossed my mind as I was composing this one!
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Every garden has a serpent looming around!
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:>) Seems that way!!
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