Four years old Anna’s, daddy played the fiddle in a small-time music group. On Saturday nights, her mother brought Anna to the Via Cappuccino to watch her daddy play.
As the group sang and played, Anna left her table and moved into the walkway where people pass to get their coffee. She threw her head of yellow curls back and danced and twirled as the music captivated her mind.
When Anna started school, her teachers reminded her that spontaneity was not welcome in the classroom. In Middle School, she became sad, bottled up, and aggressive. One day, she got sent home for a three-day suspension.
As her father drove her home that day, he told her,
“Anna, one day ‘you will love again the stranger who was your self’.”
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“Tonight, we play music!”
“Come listen to me play my fiddle (…and remember that stranger!”)
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Tonight at d”Verse, Kim asked us to write a flash fiction piece of not more than 144 words. We also were asked to include this line of a poem: ‘you will love again the stranger who was your self’
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Great story! Glad to know that Anna has a reminder of the stranger she loves.
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Thanks Astrid!
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No one should have the right to thwart another’s artistic expression!
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You are right, but sadly it happens all the time!
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Hope Anna finds the spontaneity in that stranger again..
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That would be the beauty of it all!
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This gave me chills
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Thanks Beth! You know exactly what I was trying to say. It is difficult sometimes to reach those students who are a little different than the rest. I am glad it connected with you!
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I love that your story begins and ends with music and dancing, Dwight! Nobody should be made to suppress their spontaneity, especially a child.
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I agree! Children are so full of energy and are beautiful to watch.
The first part of the story is true, but the second part is fiction!
Thanks Kim!
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Sweet and a sad indictment that our education system suppresses creativity!
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It is difficult to walk the fine line between order and chaos! It does tend to focus more on structure and order. Thanks Kate.
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Lovely 😊
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Thank you very much!
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A pleasure, it’s very beautiful!
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“You will love again the stranger who was yourself.” What a fabulous line! I followed your link to the poem from which it’s drawn. I think you capture the essence of that line in your story. Well done!
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Thank you so much! The poem was Love after Love by Derek Walcott.
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I love the wisdom of letting the free spirit grow again.
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Thank you Bjorn! We need to do more of this!
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Dance, Anna! Dance as if no one is watching … and don’t let them suppress your joy!
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Thank you! I wrote a poem about that a few years ago!
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