Give me comfort not truth
It suits me better and eases my mind
In my fine house
Behind the gate
Just down the lane
I close the door
I don’t feel your pain
Give me comfort not truth
Salve my guilt
Hide my shame
In my fine car I’m not to blame
I drive on…
Can’t be soiled or stained
Give me comfort not truth
Save my soul
Free my mind
As I drop a five in your plate
for the bottom line
I close my eyes
My heart is blind
Give me comfort not truth
Oh… what tangled webs we weave
Don’t tell me you love me
Just please don’t leave
Give me comfort not truth
As I consume Earth’s wealth
Never blinking
Fill me up…
My car, My truck, My boat, My SUV…
…Isn’t life grand!
Give me comfort not truth
Tell me what I want to hear.
God loves me more than he loves you
Maybe next year he’ll help you too
Give me comfort not truth
Vote for me // I’m God’s man
Tell ‘em to get a job
No more helping hand.
We’ll send our young solders to fight in Iran
Give me comfort not truth
My views are always best
ABC & NBC FOX & CNN
I’ll close my mind and just pretend.
Give me comfort not truth
We are the “chosen ones”
We are blessed
We deserve it,
This “Christian Nation”
No aid for them
In their situation
Give me comfort not truth
Could I be wrong?
No, it would be too hard to change
This good life will always stay the same!
Today at d’verse HA challenged us to look at privilege and how it affects us as individuals and as a society. I wrote this poem a couple of years ago when thinking about this very thing. I came to the conclusion that few want to hear or face the truth. They would much rather be comfortable.
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Fantastic!!!! 😉 😊
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Thank You so much!
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You are most welcome! 😉
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Oh wow. I loved this! And you wrote it prompted by your own hearts murmurings. Masterpiece Dwight I can see strains of my own privileged life in your lines. Is it self preservation that makes me seek the comfort of an unfinished lie? You meet the bar… No… scale it with this honest look at life.
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This is another look in the mirror for all of us, myself included. Comfort seems to blind us to the suffering and struggles of the those less privileged around us.
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too true Dwight, it was eye opening!
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Thank you so much for your kind response!
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I like the different perspective of “having that good life”.
Also the refrain of : Give me comfort not truth, works very well. A lot of people prefer actually to not know the truth. Very well done Dwight, thanks!
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Thank you so much Grace! I appreciate you taking time to read my posts! Yes, I believe comfort comes first for most people. Perhaps that is why things are so divided in our country at this time.
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Okay, this is a masterpiece. I don’t usually run anything not pretty well sugar coated on that secondary site of mine, but you’ll find this on Timeless Wisdoms anyway. It’s too good not to go. Fine work!
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Thank you for your kind affirmation and for your reblog on Timeless Wisdom!
Dwight
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Thank you so much. I am glad it connected with you. Thank you for reblogging my post~!
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I applaud you for your blunt assessment of our dysfunctional society.
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Thanks Jade!
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You are very welcome.
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Unfortunately, every religion claims to be true and asks for different sacrifices of comfort.
But I agree, comfort is not always the safest measure of a deep, meaningful life.
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Yes, it often creates even more anxiety, with our security systems, cameras, and gated communities. Not always such a good trade off! thanks for your comment~!
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Comfort vs truth… wonderfully worded, I guess we all desire to to close our eyes to truth only to dwell in privilege! Amazing!
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I don;t think any of us are exempt! Thank you for your comment and for reading.
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Great words filled with truth. The repetitive line really hits home.
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Thanks Astrid, I hoped it would drive home the message of the poem to the reader!
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I like the poem Dwight and the sentiments expressed. We should help the disadvantaged, try to get along with others, don’t go to war, do something about the environment. I have never liked the word privilege, perhaps because it’s meaning has been distorted by social media in relation to race. I also think that privilege is accruing to the minority and the comfort level of many is eroding. The divide in the US between rich and poor is growing and the middle class is diminishing. See what your poetry does, stirs up emotions, as every good poetry should.
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Thank you Len, for your thoughtful response. I believe poetry should make one who reads just a little uncomfortable, so they don’t for get the message!
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true
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The repetition is effective, Dwight, a way some people have of convincing themselves that they’re right. So many have that ‘I’m alright Jack’ attitude, wearing their privileged blinkers to avoid the truth.
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I believe you are right. It is easy to isolate our selves from the hardships of those around us.
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In the end, it is about this comfort and our propensity to seek it and hide behind it that makes us complicit in the systems of oppression, even when we are not doing it personally. It is very simple to safeguard ourselves from social realities and evils.
I really admire this thoughtful and thought-provoking narrative. Thanks for participating, Roth! 🙂
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*Dwight
My bad! 🙂
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Thanks Ammol. It is so easy to get caught up in the pursuit of comfort. Turning a blind eye to the needs around us is easier than trying to help or make a difference. I appreciate your affirmation.
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Ouch, Dwight, the truth of your poem poked me right in my comfort zone!
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Yes, it hits pretty hard!
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Well stated. Too many with sheltered lives have no sympathy for others.
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Thanks Ken. This is true!
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So very insightful! We have to deal with these issues in ourselves. Complete truth is very difficult!
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“Give me comfort not truth”
~ You sum up in such five words what plagues us as individuals and as a nation in addressing the inequalities around us.
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I see this all around and am guilty myself. We really like the comfort factor. Truth on the other hand can be spun in many ways to rationalize our personal needs.
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Stark truth in your words Dwight. Well done, and I agree, the repetitive lines are powerful.
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Thank you. A reminder all of us need from time to time.
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To me what stands out the best is
“God loves me more than he loves you
Maybe next year he’ll help you too”
To justify your privilege by this is sickening to me… the gospel of prosperity is one that turn my stomach..
No camels will be allowed through the needle’s eye in the end.
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God entitlement!! Nationalism works much the same way!
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Awesome and raw truth that doesn’t want to be heard, let alone believed by the privileged who leave the poor, ill and homeless to the Good Samaritans in life! Did they edit out “Love your neighbor as yourself” from the new versions of the Bible??? Stunning and brilliantly penned, My Friend!!!
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Thanks Chuck! I guess there is a disconnect from hearing and doing! We still have a lot to learn! I appreciate your affirmation!
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Sadly, an apt description of our throw-away society, and a generation of young people who consider themselves entitled. Fortunately, there is likewise a generation of young people intelligent and aware, determined to restore their world to dignity and integrity. Pray for them!
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The future depends on them. There is still hope that they will learn from our mistakes!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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this is so profound Dwight, do hope you are publishing it elsewhere … have you sent it to spillwords?
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This site and my facebook page is were I post. I also self publish my own poetry. Thank you so much for your kind words.
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and then sell those books commercially or just to family and friends?
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No mostly to family and friends. I also have some books on amazon kindle under my name. Only one book of poetry. The others are memoirs of childhood etc.
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good for you, you are so productive!
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It helps to be retired! :<)
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indeed, plenty of time and hopefully the funds 🙂
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Stating the reality, painful as it is, and stating it pointedly.
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Thank you for reading and commenting!
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You are very welcome Dwight
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Very effective use of “give me comfort, not truth” —-
so much easier to be oblivious to the problematic and what we don’t want to see – what is jarring and disturbing.
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With all the incidents of violence and shooting, it is hard these days to avoid the cold hard truth of what is going on around us.
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