When we moved to the Charlotte area of North Carolina several years ago, it felt like home. The rolling hills, the corn fields, and the woodlands all felt very much like the area of Pennsylvania where I grew up. I came to the conclusion that home is really a feeling that brings back memories of our past. I wrote this poem as a song at that time describing how I felt. I have edited it to make it flow better when read.
Home is a Feeling
Home is a feeling you’ll know when you’re there
No matter how far you go no matter where you’ve been
That feeling slips in and lets you know…
Home is a feeling when you’re there
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When you’re driving through the cornfields
down a long and dusy road
And you see the evening sun
sinking slowly out of sight
That feeling slips in and lets you know…
Home is a feeling and you’re there
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When you’re far away and all alone
wondering how long you’ll be gone
And a song comes on the radio
it takes you back and you’re right there
That feeling slips in and lets you know…
Home is a feeling and you’re there
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Though mom and dad are gone
and the old house stands no more
The place is still just as real
you can feel their presence there.
That feeling slips in and lets you know…
Home is a feeling when you’re there
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When you’re loved by those around you
and they all reach out to you.
Nothing else matters now…
You can see it in their smiles.
That feeling slips in and lets you know…
Home is a feeling when you’re there
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Photo: Dwight L. Roth
Love this ! 😊
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Thank you Jamie! I appreciate that you took time to read and comment.
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My pleasure!
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Really good! So true!
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Thank you! I went back to my home which is now a disaster and uncared for this past fall. The house is in bad shape, but the memories of living there are sharp and clear!
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So sorry about the decay! We hold those precious homes and memories in our hearts!
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Beautiful poem. Yes, indeed. It’s a feeling.
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Thank you so much, Mark!
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Very beautifully written😊
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Thank you very much!
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I admire your nostalgic perspective. Radios and long abandoned house.. hits me hard. I get the same feelings when I visit the old colony quarters where I grew up.
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It is the feelings rather than the buildings we preserve in our minds Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Thank you
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