Decided to bake some breakfast sweet bread
To eat when I finally crawl out of bed
Goes so good with coffee and cereal
Getting my day off to a start that’s real
Got out the dough…ingredients and all
The dough had risen // standing very tall
I split it open with knife and fingers
Filled it with nuts, butter, and cinnamon
I added some raisons // then pinched it shut
Greased the baking pan and cleaned up the nuts
Baked in the oven at 375
It looked so good as bread began to rise
Took it out of the oven just in time
I cut it open and it looked so fine
But when I tasted // something was missing
An ingredient lost in the mixing
Next morning at breakfast with jelly spread
Along with my coffee // ate the perfect bread
Something good had changed // nothing was missing
Can you guess what I forgot to put in?
Photos: Dwight L. Roth
Amaya at d’Verse asked us to write a poem that involved a secret ingredient. With all the cooking and baking done over the holidays, many people have special thing s they make that are unique to them. The add that special something that makes it work. In my poem I am doing the reverse. The question is what did I leave out that I should have put in?
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Sugar? 🙂
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Yes, the jelly fills the bill and made it perfect!! Thanks Peter!
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That sounds so yummy, sugared or not.
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Fresh out of the oven… it was wonderful!
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You’re making me hungry! I’ve left salt out of baked goods and they taste really flat.
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I find some of the rolls in restaurants seem to have left out the salt. I take the salt shaker and sprinkle a little on the butter and it works great!
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Sounds/looks perfect as-is. Yum!
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Not bad, but sweetness helped!
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the absent baker in me could not say what was missing. but i am certain, i am sure, this bread is a yummy blessing!
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I completely forgot the brown sugar!
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ugh! a bummer! 😀
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Sugar?? lol oops!
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Yep! Forgot it… completely slipped my mind…especially since it was making it up as I went!
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I think you would need to add quotations around “sweet” bread now LOL because ‘supposed-to-be-sweet bread’ just doesn’t have the same ring to it.
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Ah, that would have given away the secret ingredient!!
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I would say you missed out sugar but I think the cinnamon and raisins should have solved that problem – sounds delicious to me, Dwight!
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Oh, it was very good! It worked with some butter as well. Sort of like cinnamon toast, but it really did need the sweetness. The jelly worked!
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You had me at jam. I forgot to put sugar in some muffins a while back. I like your rhyme scheme. A,B works good for puzzles. All our websites use cookies. I don’t think there’s any sugar in them either
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Ha. Ha but they are still sweet to me!! Thanks for noting the pattern as well.
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Anything with jam is great
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You are right about that!
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I love this rhyme scheme, and the riddle. It felt like a children’s puzzle rhyme. I was looking for something more “tricky” than sugar, but once I’d seen it, it all made sense.
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Thanks for commenting… The most simple things make all the difference in taste!
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Nice poem and puzzle.. Thank you.
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Looks scrumptious! I want to come to your house for breakfast — even without the sugar! 🙂
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Haha you are welcome any time!! Thanks!
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You can bring the Jelly!
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It looks delicious Dwight and I love the rhyme scheme too 🙂
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Thank you so much! It was very tasty!
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With some bread you have to add patience, since it’s better the second day… but reading the comments I saw it was sweetness
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Yes and waiting patience and self-control!! Thanks.
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Ha! Yeah, that would have been hard to stomach for me. A little sugar and a little salt go a looong way in breads. Maybe cinnamon sugar toast? Once I left out the flour while baking cookies. I’d copied the recipe and left out the flour and followed my copy verbatim. It was a buttery mess!
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OOY GOOY! They would be very bad! The bread was good it was just lacking sweetness… Jelly did the trick!
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The jelly must make up for the missing ingredient.
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Yes, the added sweetness did the trick!
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Looks yummy to me! I use cranberries, maple syrup and raisins, smiles. Enjoy your sweets.
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You forgot to put in the velvety dark chocolate and thick sweet natural honey… at least that is what this old msn would have added Dwight… ;-/)
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That would have been an interesting alternative! Thank you for the suggestion!~
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Sugar? You forgot the sugar?
The bread looks so good though.
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Yes!! It was delicious!
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haha! nice move sir! A riddle within a poem!
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Thanks! It still went down pretty well with a little jelly!
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I know it was the sugar you forgot! Lolol! 🙂
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Yes, you are right!
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Aha! 😛
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