The Wizard of Oz was a lesson in phycology for those who watched Dorothy and her three friends struggle with their deficiencies. As they made their way down the Yellow Brick Road, they discovered the confidence they lacked was really within them. Today at d’Verse, Mish asked us to choose one of the three characters and write a poem from their perspective. I chose to write a poem addressing the Cowardly Lion’s lack of courage. At the end read the Lions response…Perhaps we could all learn something about ourselves from the Cowardly Lion!
Cowardly Lies (Dorothy)
Who stole the virginity of your mind
Telling you courage was not for you
Embedding self-depreciating thoughts
Of weak and unfounded fear
Who filled your mind with kryptonite lies
Making you weak and helpless when challenges arose
Hiding in the shadows afraid to show your face
Feeling like a mouse in a lion’s costume
You are more than a sniveling wimp
You are a Lion // proud and strong
Born with a king’s legacy in your DNA
Surrounded by a pride of ancestors gone before
To find your voice you must believe
Look deep into your heart
See the courageous King you were meant to be
Stand tall and strong // believe in yourself
Rise // and fulfill your destiny
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Photo: from d’Verse Poetry Pub
The Lions Response:
A Change of Heart
Who stole the virginity of my mind
Telling me courage was not for me
Embedding self-depreciating thoughts
Of weak and unfounded fear
Who filled my mind with kryptonite lies
Making me weak and helpless when challenges arose
Hiding in the shadows afraid to show my face
Feeling like a mouse in a lion’s costume
I AM more than a sniveling wimp
I AM a Lion // proud and strong
Born with a King’s legacy in my DNA
Surrounded by a pride of ancestors gone before
To find my voice I must believe
Look deep into my heart
See the courageous King I was meant to be
Standing tall // and strong
I believe in myself
I Rise // and fulfill my destiny
That’s well-done!! 🙂
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Thank You very much!
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I went back and added a response to the original!
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Thank you. The response is equally well-written!! Both are powerful!! 🙂 🙂
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Thanks for reading again!
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You are welcome!! 🙂
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I like this – Who taught you? Isn’t that just the key?
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Yes, that is the key to all of us!! Why we are the way we are…
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I went back and revised and added a response to the original!
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Wow, I really like the response. The lion has found his voice/courage!
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Yes, with a mighty roar!
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Great response to this prompt
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Thank you! I really appreciate you reading all my posts…. and for your kind words.
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I went back and added a response to the original.
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So powerful and empowering, truly inspiring. The choice of vocabulary is impressive!
“ I am lion, proud and strong”
“ Born with king’s legacy in my DNA”
Amazing words!!
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Thanks you so much for stopping by to read and comment. You words are greatly appreciated.
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You are most welcome!
I wrote something similar few days ago
https://tanyasblog417441432.com/2018/08/16/defeat/
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I will check it out!
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Cheers for the lion!
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Strong and powerful words building their crescendo. May we all find the strength for life’s challenges.
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Thank you. Seems like it take a little longer for some of us to find our voice!
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I like the way you turn your poem from a rallying cry to affirmations for courage and endurance.
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Thank you Suzanne!
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But Dorothy is hidden in most of beings which is the cause of all feat and shame.
The response to it is equally befitting.
👌👍
Shiva
🌷
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Thank you for your response. Yes, we all have a little of each of them in us!
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Please read it as fear…
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Yes!
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A powerful interaction between Dorothy and the Lion. This speaks to the power of positive vs. negative influences. If someone believes in us, it helps us to believe in ourselves.
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Yes, this is so true! Thanks Mish!
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I love the courageous roar that speaks out at the end.
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Yes, the way we all should feel.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Excellent take on The Wizard of Oz!
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Thank you Reena!
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True Humans Are
Lions too
And
For
Some
Males
At LeasT it’s
Just A Matter
Of Epigenetics
iN Enough Struggle
And Adaptation As Change
to Awaken the Lion In Them
Unpacking Courage DNA
A Common
First
World
Issue this
Grows as
Cowardly Lions Fall Last to:
Away From: Human PoTenTiaL NoW..:)
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Very true. Thank You.
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Thank
You
My FriEnd..:)
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Powerful, true courage.
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Thank you very much!
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I’m so glad you chose the lion and I love the poem and the response, Dwight! I especially like the lines:
‘Who filled my mind with kryptonite lies
Making me weak and helpless when challenges arose
Hiding in the shadows afraid to show my face
Feeling like a mouse in a lion’s costume’.
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Thanks Kim. I am so glad you liked it.
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I love this change of mind. I need to do this all the time!
Adsm, who told you you were naked?
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Started in the beginning! Very good!
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I liked the use of the response in combining these two poems. I also liked this description of the source of the lion’s fear: “self-depreciating thoughts
Of weak and unfounded fear”
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Those are really killers when it comes to self-conficence! Thanks Frank.
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Nice rhythm.
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Thank you so much for reading!
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Wonderful response to the prompt!
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Thanks Jo!
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Well this is just amazing. 🙂 I really really enjoyed it a lot! Especially the last part!!
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Thank you so much! I am really glad you liked it!
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Fantastic title, and I love the poem and response format of this awesome piece.
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Thank you so much for reading.
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“Who filled your mind with kryptonite lies” What a line! We both picked the lion but you gave him strength.
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Thank you so much. It just felt right!
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