A Tanaga Poem

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Fishers come with hook and beak
Lunch is found in Hammer Creek
One sits dangling on the shore
Heron dives // comes back for more

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Frank is challenging us to try the Tanaga form of poetry, for our d’Verse poetry group.  It consists of four lines with seven syllables in each line. It has a rhyming pattern. It usually has no title, since the lines of the verse should make clear what is being said. This is my first attempt at writing a Tanaga poem. The heron in the photo is a Great White Egret. They often nest in the Susquehanna Valley region of Pennsylvania.

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Photos from Hammer Creek near Clay, Pennsylvania. – Dwight L. Roth

70 thoughts on “A Tanaga Poem

  1. Good fishing for both I hope. I’ll be the heron does better. I like the rhyming of the meter. It seems to kind of flow well with the meter. I caught a blue heron once, when he dove in for my lure. Liked to have been beaked before we got him free.

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  2. How are you able to get so many images of nature!
    Where I live, its just concrete, concrete, concrete…….
    Its so bad, that when I went to write a poem about it, it took 400 words…….

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    • Thank you so much Colin. No I went away with something more lasting…photos and memories. I was very lucky to get these shots. I was shooting photos of the old mill and the mill pond and all of a sudden this beautiful Great Egret rose up out of the marsh grass along the mill pond. It was definitely the best catch of the day!! Thank you!
      Dwight

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