Our Love (A Quadrille)
Our love’s a poem
written in the tide…
Spelling out our dreams
on the shore of life
Poem of lasting quality
Ebb and flow from day to day
Smooth, serene, mirroring the sky…
Crashing // bold from deep within
Our Love…
Written for the ages
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Photo: Dwight L. Roth
Today’s challenge from Victoria is to write a Quadrille (of 44 words) using the word poem in it. Come visit us at d’Verse~Poetry Pub and join the challenge. It is a very inspiring group of writers who share and read together.
Roth Poetry 
The best poetry is that of love… we need to ink it well
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Thank you. Love poems never get old… Mushy, but never old!
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Such a meaningful love poem, Dwight. Thanks for sharing.
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Finding this kind of love is a true blessing – a beautiful poem Dwight!
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“written for the ages” I like that last line a lot.
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Thanks…. It says it all!!
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Exactly 🙂
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Soo romantic ❤️❤️
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Thank you for your kind comment!
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Oh, I would love to be able to say this one day, and have a lifetime of love in action to back it. Thank you for sharing, Dwight.
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Thank you Amaya! In time…. I appreciate your comment!
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Thank you for your kind comment!
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What a beautiful love poem!
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Thank you so much!!
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This is great.
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Thanks!!
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Romantic Roth – very moving
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Thank you for reading!!
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Beautiful metaphor here.
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Thank you very much!
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I especially liked “Crashing // bold from deep within” — And I thought “Our love…” was the last line, and I liked the idea of that, too.
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Thank you so much for your great comments.
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All of Colors
More
A Poem
oF LoVE..:)
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Thank you for reading!
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Welcome..:)
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A beautiful love poem!
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Thank you Mary! I appreciate your kind words.
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Such a lovely love poem Dwight. So sweet and eternal in its theme.
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Thank you so much!
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Nice poem to the love. I got a very peaceful feeling from reading this.
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Thanks Frank!
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Beautifully written poem.
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Thank you for reading….
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Your google site dumps my comments, so I will say here that I really liked your poem of writing on the clouds and watching them float away! Great imagery!
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Surf and love show different patterns but constant is the best! Beautiful poetry, Dwight.
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Love that lasts is like the surf washing yesterday’s troubles away, so you can enjoy today! Poetry in motion….
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Lovely thoughts…yes!
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Thanks!
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Clever message in the sand.
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Thank You!
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Beautiful 🙂
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Beautiful…I nominated you to the Sunshine Blogger Award.Do visit my latest post
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Thank you so much! I will check it out. I appreciate your kind affirmation!!
Dwight
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Oh, a love poem, and you do them so well, too!
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Thank you…I appreciate your kind words!
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Elegant and touching, Dwight!
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Thank you Frank. I appreciate your kind words!
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Ah love, the stuff of good poems … and here was another one!
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Thank you Beverly for your kind words.
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Love as a poem…now that is a beautiful analogy.
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Thank you so much!
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Your love poem sparkles on the tide, Dwight – nicely done.
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Thank you,Kim! I appreciate your kind words.
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